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Title: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable 01 Dec 2009 11:06 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, his secret is out. Poor Harry.

    Lovely chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 56 – The new Healer 01 Dec 2009 7:07 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    A nice chapter! What good news you have for readers who DON'T like Draco? Mila

    Author's Response: That in two chapter after the next, Draco won't be part. ;)
Title: Chapter 56 – The new Healer 01 Dec 2009 4:35 am
Reviewer: Kyleigh (couldn't bother to sign in) (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It was good to see that you gave your teaching theory good thought. All you have in the chapter is correct (I'm a teacher I should know). You have listed two or three of the learning styles - although you have hands on learners who need concrete materials and do it. Good work. You eviently thought about this before you write. Good. :)

    Author's Response: As a social worker in a children shelter I have to do a lot of homework with the kids. So I have to be creative and read a lot of books how to help them. :) I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 56 – The new Healer 01 Dec 2009 12:36 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so sweet I'm glad that Harry is feeling more confident now.



    That was so cute too when Harry called SEverus "Dad."

    Great job. I'm curious to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: There wil be more about this Calling-Severus- Dad-thing. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 56 – The new Healer 30 Nov 2009 11:21 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay Harry's not stupid! LOL. We knew he wasn't, but it's great to hear Harry say that so jubilantly. The circle studying thing is kind of cool. Interesting that Harry figured it out himself.

    I liked that James helped Harry calm down. I didn't really get that Harry fell asleep right away so it seemed strange that Ivy, Severus, and James were talking about him so much in front of him.

    Great chapter. I liked how Harry now has "Toys" distracting him, and i wonder how Severus and Ivy will help him cope with all these new changes in his life. I suppose that the memory potion is off now, right?

    Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, we all knew it except of Harry.

    The memory potion out of the way? Do you really think Harry will give this up so easy? You are like Severus and Ivy; too in good faith. Only two more chapters and you will see how stupid Harry can be.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 56 – The new Healer 30 Nov 2009 9:36 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful, so glad he is not using the potion...i so hope it does not come up again

    Author's Response:

    Oh, but Harry is already brewing it and I fear he won't give up. Only two more chapter and you will see how stupid Harry can be.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable 28 Nov 2009 10:01 am
Reviewer: -NightRise- (Signed) [Report This]
    whoa nice

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable 27 Nov 2009 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Seems to me if they didn't want to pressure or stress Harry at all they wouldn't have marked his homework and just let him study with his class having his teachers keep his track of his grades privately for his parents for a end of year review. Not very logical these wizards--they are the ones putting pressure on Harry and not finding any relief for him.

    Author's Response: Even wizards are just human and make mistakes. :)
Title: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable 25 Nov 2009 11:30 am
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really enjoying your story. it is extremely well written and the dialogue is fabulous.

    However, I must confess that I find this immature, almost psychotic version of Harry unbelievable. Where is his Gryffindor courage? I don't think he would deliberately deceive his parents again. It's totally out of character with the Harry we know always wanting to please those he loves.

    Author's Response:

    The Harry in my version has ben abused much more than the canon Harry. That changes people and that's the reason why the Harry in my story behaves like he does. I always use the kids at my work as a reference for his behavior. They are abused, neglected.... Harry is still unsure about his place in the family. He really wants to make everything right and that they are proud of him but has problems to do it. The potion is an easy way out. The other problem is that Harry feels powerless against the adults that want to rule his life. All the other years he managed almost everything alone and now he has to accept that other people decide what's best. Harry doesn't feel comfortable enough to express his feelings open to Ivy andSeverus and so he tries to achieve his goal behind their backs. That's way he still wants to brew the potion.

    I hope I could explain to you my reasons why Harry behaves like he does.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 55 – The Inevitable 25 Nov 2009 9:09 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Ivy and Severus need to change their approach when it comes to the marks. It's his drive to make them proud that's causing the problem; he feels that if he doesn't do well they won't love him anymore and his desperation is causing him to fail. He has no self-confidence and that is what they should focus on more than anything else. The more they try to 'fix' him, the worse they seem to make him feel. It would be awful of them to make him repeat a year; I really think it would destroy what little self-esteem he has left. There has to be a better way then pulling him out of classes again. (I wonder how long it will take for them to figure out about the potion. I'm sure it's against school rules.)

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ivy and Severus are still learning how to raise a teenager. It's new for them as well. Give them some time.

    Thank you very much for your review! 


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