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Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 8:57 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great chapter...do i smell a romance in the wings or is it just humor??

    Author's Response:

    Romance???? Between whom? God I'm scared now. Please tell me what gave you the idea of Romance in this chapter! I hope you just meant Lily/Severus, did you? PLease tell me!

    Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Fawkes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You've definitely got Severus in character. Nice job. You portray him well. I kind of hate him, though. He's not easy to like though. For Harry's sake I wish he wouldn't be so outwardly hateful of Remus, yet make Harry put the photos on the wall. I would be conflicted, too! What a strange parent to figure out! James is great. And I love Remus.

    Author's Response:  I'm really glad you like it! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 3:36 pm
Reviewer: omega13a (Signed) [Report This]
    Umm, somewhere in the last part of the chapter, lunch became dinner. Other then that, good chapter. Keep up the good work!

    Author's Response: I corrected it! Thanks for telling me! To be honest I didn't know that their is a different between them, Now I know! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 1:26 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    How lovely!! :) I'm so glad that Harry has all these people watching out for him, and taking care of him. It makes me happy. :)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad that it makes you happy. :) And you make me happy with your review!
Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad that Severus and Harry are becoming closer, and that Severus is making an effort to make Harry comfortable in his home. Also, it is very good of Severus to put aside his dislike of Sirius and James, and not to try to poison Harry's mind against them.

    Nice work, I'm looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: There will be more Severus/Harry interactions soon. The next chapter already is at my beta! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 22 – Remus Visit 17 Mar 2009 11:20 am
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice chapter. loved sev and harry in this one. hope to read more soon. :)

    Author's Response: There will be more Severus/Harry interactions. The next chapter already is at my beta! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to accept 14 Mar 2009 12:31 am
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like how he was mollycoddled by his new mum and grandmum. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 – The Confrontation 13 Mar 2009 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Maquislady1388 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm only on chapter 3 and already i'm already very confused. I think it's supposed to be the begining of third year but Harry mentions having Remus as a teacher and friend. We know that Remus didn't come to Hogwarts till 3rd year in cannon and Harry had not met his before that. If this is supposed to be an alternate Universe I would suggest getting a good beta who can help you make the details of this A/U a little clearer. I also think the charecters act to mature for their age. if Harry and co. are 13 then Ginny is only 12 and would still be to young to have a steady boyfriend let alone one who is three years older then her.

    Author's Response:

    First, it is stated as AU!

    Second, not only Remus but also Moody are there and it is stated clearly why they are there in the first chapter! I'm very satisfied with my beta and won't take another one. Some people say the characters act to childish and others say they are to mature. I can't make anyone happy. Sorry. At my work I have 12 year old girls who already have babys, not that I think this is good, but I can't see a problem to have Ginny a beginning relationship with Lee. I didn't say that there was more than kissing or holding hands. Thanks for your opinion and I hope my explaination made clear why I won't change something!

Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to accept 13 Mar 2009 12:05 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this chapter, Loved that Harry is acting like a child. He needs to be able to through a fit and be a kid. i think his first spanking will be over quidditch

    Author's Response:

    There will only be one spanking and it will only be three slaps and it won't be about Quidditch. He will do something much more dangerous!

    Thanks for your review!

Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to accept 12 Mar 2009 4:41 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I am curious about the shopping - update soon, please :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! First Remus will visit and then the shopping!

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