Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to accept 12 Mar 2009 12:33 am
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    awww that was great i love how the twins are with harry

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 21 – Hard to accept 11 Mar 2009 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw poor Harry, having to give up something he loves so much!

    I hope that maybe Harry will heal and he'll be able to play Quidditch again!

    Nice work, and I love the twins and the family dynamic.

    Author's Response: He will have the oppotunity to play Quidditch again in a few month. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione 10 Mar 2009 11:44 pm
Reviewer: FS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice job!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione 09 Mar 2009 9:40 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful!! Keep it coming! Rhiannan

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 12 – Harry 's New Home 09 Mar 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it's hilarious! Poor Professor Snape!!

    Author's Response: :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 – Professor Dumbledore-Snape 09 Mar 2009 8:15 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the story, but I have to say that it does sorta sound like Harry's got a crush. I don't have any suggestions on how to fix it, though.

    Author's Response: I think the problem will solve itself in the next chapters! Thanks for your opinion and the review!
Title: Chapter 20 - Ron and Hermione 05 Mar 2009 1:33 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad at the way everything resolved itself. Harry needs to learn how to control his panic attacks, but I'm glad that his friends were able to see what went on, and will now be able to help him in the future. Poor Severus, but I think he deserves being sicker now because he took a potion to mask his symptoms.

    great chapter and thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, he will learn to control them. Thanks for your review!

    By the way do you still update your 'Jan's list' ?  I'm fighting my way through it. It's amazing. It must have cost you a lot of time but thanks for it!

Title: Chapter 19 - Decorating 05 Mar 2009 1:20 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Neat door. A little scary, but neat. I'm glad that Harry finally threw out his old clothes. That was a long time in coming. :) And now his room is really his room. Nice development!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 18 - James 05 Mar 2009 1:14 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, yay. :) Things are looking up for Harry now.

    Be careful to watch the tenses. You seem to want to write in the past tense, but not everything matches right. For example: "Harry didn't knew what to say to all this." It should be "Harry didn't know what to say to all this." Know is present tense because didn't is past tense already and you aren't supposed to have two past tense words in a row.

    Author's Response: I will check it again. The tenses are very hard for me. :(
Title: Chapter 17 - Breakfast 05 Mar 2009 12:57 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOw, I really like how you introduced how Severus was addicted to potions in the past, and how James watches out for him now. Fabulous plot unfolding, and the background too. :) Harry is so right - kids really do pick up on the hidden messages of adults.

    Author's Response: Yes, many adult underestimate it! Thanks for your review!

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