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Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 16 Feb 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love this chapter I liked how Severus was teasing Harry with his clothes.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it! Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 15 Feb 2009 5:12 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That is a weird bathroom. I think I would refuse to use it, especially as I couldn't pee standing up. There must be a common bathroom for guest.

    Author's Response: Just be patient!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 11:47 pm
Reviewer: toast (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great! i loved how Sev and Harry are getting more comfortable with each other

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 7:44 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a great father and son moment...it was a fantastic chapter and cannot wait for more xxx

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 7:39 pm
Reviewer: Tamer42gfd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this story, I like the interaction between Severus and Harry.
    Can't wait to read more. Thanks

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 12 Feb 2009 7:03 pm
Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved this chapter Harry imagining that Dumbledore and Severus being swatted like he did to sit down to got to the bathroom

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 6:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked it, and can't wait for more. I look forward to the shopping trip.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! Reviews like yours are really encouraging and let me forget the negative ones! :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 5:54 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter!!! loved it. dont know how anyone could find anything sexual in there. it was all father/son bonding!!! loved it!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: Frogzilla08 (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story how often do you plan on updating it this chapter was great I loved seeing them bond

    Author's Response: There are more chapter already written and right now I have no problems with writing, but of course there could come times were it isn't that easy to write. My beta needs always 3-4 days to correct my chapters, so that is the normal update rate. Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 4:54 pm
Reviewer: ashmeadowphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! It was nice to see the father son relationship developing. Although, it was a little mean to wait until Harry stumbled to resize his jeans. Boy, would I be very very annoyed with that room.

    Author's Response:

    I thought I shouldn't made Severus too kind and so the stumbling part was the softest way to write it. Harry won't even notice the room later.

    Thanks for your review!


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