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Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 4:27 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Sorry I think Paul needs to be hexed as does the room. Is Servus suppose to have a clue about how to deal with kids that have been abused?

    Author's Response: Paul is annoying, I know, but that makes the story interesting in my opinion! Severus has no idea how to handle abused children. He just acts like he thinks it's best. And that isn't always the most patient and empathic way, but he tries. I tried to show his inexpierence with this topic and his good will of taking care for Harry the way I write his interactions with Harry. If I can't convey this in my writing, I'm sorry.
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 3:06 pm
Reviewer: gin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i love it.snape and harry are very sweet.snape is harry' real father?

    Author's Response: No, he isn't his real father. In the moment he is his guardian.
Title: Chapter 16 – You have nothing I haven't seen before 12 Feb 2009 1:35 pm
Reviewer: christy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved it, looking forward to more!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 11 Feb 2009 2:04 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    what a funny bathroom!! poor harry, its definitely not reminders that he needs any more, lol.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 10 Feb 2009 8:16 pm
Reviewer: Jamie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This chapter was funny, a possessed bathroom. I hope Ivy, Severus, Dumbledore or McGonagall change the instructions for Harry in the bathroom, otherwise it would be very awkward for him. Paul seems really bossy. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response: We will see. :) Thanks for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 07 Feb 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: shan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    nice chapter.. waiting for more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 07 Feb 2009 4:40 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    what the frig? why isn't he allowed to pee standing up???

    Author's Response:

    First, I have no idea what frig means and I will just hope that that wasn't an insult and can just overread it.

    Second, he isn't allowed to pee standing because even in the wizard world someone has to clean the toilet and there is a reason why urinals are much higher than normal toilets. And he won't die by sitting down and it definitely won't decrease his maleness. What's so hard about sitting down? We women have to do it as well. And the charm was made for the twins, remember? Aiming is still a problem in at this age. But if you go on reading you will see that Harry tries to sneak around this rule.  

Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 07 Feb 2009 12:15 pm
Reviewer: ER (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That's a weird bathroom. I'd hate to have to use one like it.

    Author's Response: Who adult wouldn't hate to use a bathroom like this, but it would quite handy to have one for your kids. AND this is fanfiction and that means sometime you have to write weird things to make a story interesting. Harry will adjust with it soon.
Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 07 Feb 2009 12:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahaha!!! That was awesome. Poor Harry and that bathroom! What a clever idea!! But how embarrassing! LOL.

    I bet that Snape will soon get into trouble for wearing himself down. Thanks for the warning of CP.

    Good writing on this chapter and thanks so much for sharing it with us!

    Author's Response:

    Of course I will warn the readers about the CP. As I'm no fan of this in real life I can totally understand that some readers don't want to read something like this, but like I said I will need it for the plot and it is something Severus would do (at least like I write him).

    I'm glad you liked the chapter!

Title: Chapter 15 – Paul 06 Feb 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: proline (Anonymous) [Report This]
    excellent!! I loved the bathroom sceen. forcing harry to sit made me laugh. I can't wait to see how he will resolve that problem. Is he going to have the courage to ask either Professor Snape or Dumbeldore for an alternate toilet? I also would like to see what the other rules will be as well as how Harry and Snape survive the week together.

    Author's Response:

    I would love to have this "Sit down" spell on my toilet as well. :) And therefore Harry won't get another bathroom. :P He will not ask for one, but he will try to sneak in the adults bathrooms later! You will see.

    Thanks for your review!


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