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Reviews For Harry and His New Family
Author's Response: Paul is annoying, I know, but that makes the story interesting in my opinion! Severus has no idea how to handle abused children. He just acts like he thinks it's best. And that isn't always the most patient and empathic way, but he tries. I tried to show his inexpierence with this topic and his good will of taking care for Harry the way I write his interactions with Harry. If I can't convey this in my writing, I'm sorry.
Author's Response: No, he isn't his real father. In the moment he is his guardian.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: We will see. :) Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: First, I have no idea what frig means and I will just hope that that wasn't an insult and can just overread it. Second, he isn't allowed to pee standing because even in the wizard world someone has to clean the toilet and there is a reason why urinals are much higher than normal toilets. And he won't die by sitting down and it definitely won't decrease his maleness. What's so hard about sitting down? We women have to do it as well. And the charm was made for the twins, remember? Aiming is still a problem in at this age. But if you go on reading you will see that Harry tries to sneak around this rule.
Author's Response: Who adult wouldn't hate to use a bathroom like this, but it would quite handy to have one for your kids. AND this is fanfiction and that means sometime you have to write weird things to make a story interesting. Harry will adjust with it soon.
I bet that Snape will soon get into trouble for wearing himself down. Thanks for the warning of CP. Good writing on this chapter and thanks so much for sharing it with us! Author's Response: Of course I will warn the readers about the CP. As I'm no fan of this in real life I can totally understand that some readers don't want to read something like this, but like I said I will need it for the plot and it is something Severus would do (at least like I write him). I'm glad you liked the chapter!
Author's Response: I would love to have this "Sit down" spell on my toilet as well. :) And therefore Harry won't get another bathroom. :P He will not ask for one, but he will try to sneak in the adults bathrooms later! You will see. Thanks for your review! |
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