Gee... On the surface, the story comes across as very sad-- the sheer degree of emotional neglect Harry has to deal with. But your wonderful details make it a fascinating read: awaking on the floor with a weird crick, playing with his toes under the blanket, his father SNIFFING him (!), the feeling of being tucked in-- it's so REAL! And the feel-good ending helps lift spirits at long last. Nice job! :-)
Aw that was so sweet. This would make a great longer story!
I'm glad that Harry is spending Christmas with his Dad!
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