Wait, now why doesn't Sev realize that Craig is lying now? How could the broken broom have made its way back to Harry's room? The professor found Harry and they didn't say anything about bringing the broom back. Personally, I think that Harry destroyed the broom out of anger after the beating. There's no way that Craig could or would have brought all the pieces back and put them in Harry's trunk.
-P.G.
OMG, Craig is one sick man! This is really creepy.
-P.G.
Hehe, I already looked ahead to see what would happen because I couldn't take the suspense of waiting several hours before I could read this again. I feel so bad for Harry though... Is it Craig doing it or is it someone else?
-P.G.
This is absolutely excellent - Can't wait for the next installment!
As much as I love Harry feeling love and the broom and all that, I'm thinking that Craig is seriously bad news. I'm very worried about what might happen.
-P.G.
I'm disliking Craig already. I think Harry would be better off by himself than with Craig when Snape goes.
-P.G.
Boring?! I think not. Your story is much better than you give it credit for. I love the hugging--it makes me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy inside; who'd have thought that Snape of all people could bring that sort of feeling?
-P.G.
| Title: Holding Back, Letting Go
| 10 Jan 2009 1:12 pm
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| Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous)
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I've just read the 19 first chpaters of your story. I really like it (even though I didn't read the parts with heavy abuse, it's too much angst for me).
I like your Snape, he came to care for Harry but you managed to keep him relatively IC. I wonder what he will to Craig (we all know that canon Snape can hold a grudge better than anyone else).
Oh bugger. I hope Harry hasn't done something bad for his health!
-P.G.
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