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Title: Chapter 5: Curiosity Makes Trouble 28 Feb 2009 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm getting impatient for Harry and Snape to get together.

    I shall reserve my thoughts as to the canonness of nice Tobias

    Author's Response: You'll have to re-find your patience, it won't happen for a while. Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 5: Curiosity Makes Trouble 28 Feb 2009 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    loved it!! hehee. Harry can't stay guilty or tell a lie to save his life. Tobias doesn't have anything to worry about on that one. Great chapter! thanks so much for the update!

    Author's Response:

    Hehe, we'll see....Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 5: Curiosity Makes Trouble 28 Feb 2009 7:47 pm
Reviewer: strangergirl86 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter and the little limerick at the end. Thanks.

    Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 26 Feb 2009 9:31 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Gone With Wind's a classic and it's actually an excellent book, I've read several times and seen the movie as much. Watch it first, it'll help you get the gist of all the characters and the plot.

    Poor Severus1 I feel so bad that he has to go back to that disgusting awful thing. And then at the OOP meetings, the others sneer at him for his work. I'd like to shove them in a room with the monster and see how long they'd last!

    I guess Wormtails going to bite the big one, huh? Well, at least he fulfilled his debt. Hope Severus finds Harry soon. But he'll probably die when he finds out who Harry's with!

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review! Yes, Gone With The Wind is an interesting read, I wasn't saying it was bad. I'm just used to fantasy books, hehe.
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 20 Feb 2009 11:47 pm
Reviewer: Kodak717 (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think I've ever read a fanfic where Wormtail saves Harry. It's good - gives him a human dimension you don't usually see associated with the character. Nice job, and very nice writing.

    Author's Response: Even bad guys have feelings and a sense of right and wrong--well, maybe not Voldie but that's a different subject.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 19 Feb 2009 9:45 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    It sure will be a needle in the hay-stack search in trying to find Harry. I mean, not only is Harry missing, but having no knowledge of whom he is, it’s not likely he’ll try to contact anyone and say ‘here I am!’. Boy, I wouldn't want to have to be the one to tell people that, but at least they'll know he's alive.

    P.S. Poor Scorpia! Some kids are just too mischievous for their own good, but you'd think they'd choose a better hiding place, lol :)

    Author's Response: Lol, it wasn't too bad, last time I saw they were horrible. That was a few years ago and the kids were good this time. It will be a pain trying to find Harry. He has no idea who he is, Tobias does not have connections with the Wizarding world--yep, utter chaos here we come.
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 18 Feb 2009 1:38 am
Reviewer: Attackfish (Signed) [Report This]
    Word of advise, try reading the Southern accents out loud. It helps.

    I never thought I'd say this, but poor Peter, tortured and killed because for once the slimeball tried to do the right thin, and by the way, screwing that up royally too? Man, Scorpia, you're awful.

    Author's Response: Peter didn't really fail, he got Harry away from Voldemort and no one knows where he is--but the bad thing is that NO ONE knows where he is, lol. At least Harry's safe...for a while at least. I'll try reading the accents out loud, thanks!
Title: Chapter 4: Serving A Monster 17 Feb 2009 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Believe me, reading Gone with the Wind sure beats watching the movie...which I've never been able to do completely.
    Great writing. Very interesting, detailed and nicely paced.

    Author's Response: Tee hee, I've only seen bits and pieces of the movie, never the whole thing. Thank you, and I'm glad you liked it!
Title: Chapter 3: Naming Oneself 06 Feb 2009 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, of course harry would be different, he can't remember anything about his past or even his own name. Anyone would be different if they couldn't do that. it's almost like getting reborn.

    I like Tobias here, he's gruff and sarcastic, but not cruel. Does Sev have a decent relationship with him in this story?

    I love the part when he told Harry "somewhere a village is missing its idiot" I saw that on a T-shirt once and died laughing! It's a typical Snape saying.

    I'm assuming Fendi is an Old English sheepdog and not a Border collie? I love dogs.

    Author's Response: Right on the nose! Fendi is, indeed, an Old English sheepdog. As for the Snape's relationship--you'll just have to wait, we'll get around to it soon enough, :) Thank you!
Title: Chapter 2: Two Taken, One Returned 06 Feb 2009 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's too bad Dumbledore didn't discover what was left of Voldy and kill him before they resurrected him.

    You did a good job with Severus.

    Oh and it should be "effects wear off" not "affects" and there was a part where you put an apostrophe in the plural of Aurors, you don't need a possessive there.
    "Fudge and the Aurors hurried over" is how it should read.

    Hope you don't mind my little corrections. I'm in my Sev-teacher mode today, it seems. LOL!

    Author's Response: I think I like your Sev-teacher mode, lol. I want people to correct me, and help me when I make mistakes, so thank you!

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