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Title: Chapter 18 – The Animagus 07 Aug 2009 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Cammy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh - that was short but fabulous. Actually, I would have bet money on Harry becoming a big panther. But a hellhound is even better. Now I'm really curious what Alastor, Poppy and Severus' reactions to Harry's animagus form will be.
    Thank you for the fast update.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 05 Aug 2009 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it was bound to come out sooner or later. And of course they would be angry, it's a normal reaction because they are afraid of losing both Harry and Severus.

    Besides, Harry has never been a good one for keeping secrets. At least Severus isn't angry with him.

    But something tells me Albus is in trouble.

    Author's Response:

    You are right! :)

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 05 Aug 2009 9:35 am
Reviewer: Nesaja (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!!!! I can hardly wait to know what happens next. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 05 Aug 2009 1:04 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved this chapter. Snape and Harry seemed like true brothers at the end. The younger one getting the older one in trouble. Can't wait for next chapter.

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Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 04 Aug 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: jessirose85 (Signed) [Report This]
    Alastor is in trouble...Poppy and him both have fierce tempers xx

    Great chapter xx

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Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 04 Aug 2009 11:40 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg, is there something in that IV that made Harry talk? Aw, poor Severus, and poor Harry.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm dying to see where this goes!

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Title: Chapter 17 – The Confession 04 Aug 2009 7:48 am
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ow....poor Harry. In this chappy he really had his emotions on a roller coaster ride and it's good that he doesn't have to keep lying about his training. It would have liked to be a fly on the wall during Alastor's "conversation" with Sev and it was soo hilarious when he threatened him to bunk in the same bed with him, Harry and Poppy.
    As always, I loved this chapter and I think the story keeps getting better and better. Keep it up! You're doing woderfully.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 30 Jul 2009 6:25 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

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Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Min (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting.

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Title: Chapter 16 – The First Training 28 Jul 2009 7:08 am
Reviewer: Cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey grugster. Great chapter. I loved the Albus/Harry training interaction. Now I'm also VERY curious about Harry's animagus form.
    Your description of the twilight-sphere was similar to one I have seen in a movie ("Nightwatch"). I really like your idea that the twilight can be accessed as a means of diversion and assassination.
    I hope that Alastor will make an appearance in the next chapter - due to reading your story I am starting to like him:-)
    Thank you so much for the update and for devoting your time to write for other people's entertainment.
    Love,
    Cammy

    Author's Response:

    First, thank you very much for this encouraging review! I needed it very much.

    Yes, I got the idea about the twilight from the Night Watch book series! Only that I left out the many layers the twilight has in this books. 

    Alastor is a main character in almost all my stories. You can find more on fanfiction(dot)net if you are interested. I have the same account name there. And yes, he will play a main role in the next chapter!

    Thank you very much for your review!


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