Nice and interessting.
CCAP
Someday, Mark Evans was determined he'd find this 'Everybody' and kick him in the balls.
Best line ever.
Absolutely ace! :)
I like your characterization of Mark, and the way you let us into his head. I liked how you had Snape do such a terrific and clever thing as to have Dobby help resolve the problem with Sirius and the need for Harry to have a new and safe home, and yet stay his snarky, Slytherin self. :) And I liked how at the end you showed Mark's Slytherin nature in the final line.
Well done!
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| 07 Jul 2010 3:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the story but felt the ending was alittle rushed but I'm greedy and would like more!
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| 03 Apr 2010 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous)
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I like it! Very clever-very clever indeed. I especially like Mark.
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| 09 Jun 2009 1:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristin (Anonymous)
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I *loved* this story. You make Mark into such a great character & I'm glad that someone finally decides to help Harry.
good story! Mark was good as an original character too. :)
Good story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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