Nice story. I really liked seeing the neighborhood kids’ perspective on Harry, versus the typical Dursley driven one.
Short but sweet. I sort of like the fact that Snape and Harry didn't suddenly become best buds. Too much bad blood there for anything to change.
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| 16 Dec 2015 10:54 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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| Title: Making Things Even
| 13 Nov 2015 12:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous)
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Awweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, Mark is so cute, I loved this. Great one shot.
Nice. I like the way you show what Mark thinks, and comparing Harry to Cinderella was a nice touch.
I thought the way that Snape fixes things at the end was very in character and Slytherin, much more plausible than the more direct approach authors often use.
| Title: Making Things Even
| 17 Apr 2015 2:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent story thank you so much
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