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Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 10 Oct 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! What clever children. At least they're fighting for their lives.

    You did a good job portraying the children and their fear and bravery.

    Ha ha! Wormtail thought that he was so clever!
    I'm looking forward to seeing more of Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Yes and they will continue to fight until something happens to them . . .if something happens to them.

    Thanks so much for letting me know that, it relieves my mind.

    He did, but the joke . . .and the snake . . .was on him!

Title: The Mastery of Fear 08 Oct 2009 12:32 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That was a very moving chapter. I liked it, even though it made me shudder. Don't let Albus die! Then his redemption would be meaningless. Can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! As for Albus dying . . .I can't say yes or no at this point, you'll just have to read onward.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 08 Oct 2009 12:21 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I think you really captured the nature of scarifice and Dumbledore's remorse for what he has done is truly felt, no half measures. It's true what they say--you never know how someone feels until you take a walk in their shoes. And he's definitely done that here. Marvelous! Post again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked this one. You're so right, and Albus has, unfortunately learned this lesson the hard way. 
Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as usual. Nice scene with Albus's sister and Lily.....maybe there is hope of the old man yet.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! There could be hope for him, you'll see in time!
Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 6:08 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God. that was really an intense chapter. I've got tears in my eyes.

    Yes, it was beautifully written, but hard to read. I had a rough weekend, and the week's not going so well either, so this chapter really hit the old tear buckets.

    Well done SG, please update soon.

    Oh, and I'm really enjoying Ariadne. Everyone should go check it out. You've made me interested in Greek Mythology, and I love your twist on it.

    Author's Response:

    Aww! Sorry I made you cry. 

    Yay, for reading Ariadne! I'm so glad you're reading it and enjoying it, especially because Greek Mythology is one of my passions, I minored in it in college and love the old tales.

Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 6:05 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Although it was a rather dark depressing chapter for Albus I definatly think it was necessary to show just how sorry he is and to be able to say that he now knows just what Severus and Harry have had to go through in their lives, it was well written :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I had hoped people would feel that way about it, because sometimes one has to suffer through their own "dark night" to really understand the suffering of others. 
Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 12:08 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really a moving chapter about Albus finding himself, finally.

    Author's Response: yeah it is and I think it was necessary to have it here, so people can see just what it takes for the old man to redeem himself.
Title: What Will You Sacrifice? 05 Oct 2009 3:23 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, it's certainly an interesting turn of events, to say the least. Wouldn't it be great if Sev & Harry could destroy the final Horcrux before it can be used in the ritual? Since they know where to look for it...although timing's pretty tight...

    Author's Response: Yes, the timing is crucial and it's drawing to a close, their window of opportunity.  You'll see what I mean if you read the next part. I have posted it.
Title: What Will You Sacrifice? 02 Oct 2009 8:02 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't wait till Lucius and Bella get theirs!! I really can't stand them. Of course, they are bad guys, so I'm not supposed to, but you really make me hate them.

    Those poor kids! And I even feel sorry for Dumbledore. Please Severus and Harry, come and save them. I don't want them to die!

    Author's Response: So true! I don't want them to die either!
Title: What Will You Sacrifice? 28 Sep 2009 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! This is not good at all! Poor Albus! I hope things do not work out the way Lucius wants them too. Harry and Severus have to come and rescue them!

    Author's Response: They'll certainly try1 Thanks for reviewing!

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