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Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 1:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally, Severus got to Harry. I was going mad that Harry kept flying way from him. Can't wait to read the next post. Love the story.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry was being very difficult. You can read it now, since I've just posted! Thanks!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 11:19 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally, the talk is going to proceed! I can't wait to read it. But I loved how all the others were trying to persuade stubborn Harry to talk to Sev and how Harry was so certain Sev wouldn't forgive him. That's a typical Gryffindor mindset, they see the world in black and white for the most part or their own narrow vision.

    Jilly is adorable, I love her, and Grace's advice was perfect.

    Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I agree, Gryffindors are very stubborn and very opinionated. You'll see more Jilly later and I have just updated again!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 7:53 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Looking forward to the next chapter, though to be honest, this one seems a bit like a filler.

    Author's Response:

    Well, it does need to be in here, because I wanted to show just how bad Harry was avoiding Severus and how it was affecting him and the rest of the Witherspoons. I didn;t want it to seem like the Witherspoons weren't aware of what was going on or that they didn;t care about what was happening with Harry and Sev. Pluse I wanted to stress how sick Severus was and why he didn't go after Harry himself once he awoke fully. I know it's frustrating waiting for Harry to stop running away and talk to Snape, but Harry is so stubborn and this seemed like the best way to illustrate it.

    And the next part's up now!

Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 6:09 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Those darn cliffies!
    Don't leave us hanging long!

    Author's Response: Okay I won't! I've just posted the next one!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next one and the rital!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I have updated so you can see what happens.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 3:34 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally - I'm soo looking forward to their talk!!! Great chapter!! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: I have just updated, so go and read what happens next!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Jilly is so funny and cute. :)
    Harry very very stubborn child that he is, hopefully this talk will go well!

    Author's Response: Oh yes, he sure is! And the talk will be surprising, I hope.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 12:20 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay im glad that Severus is finally strong enough to go to Harry, it didnt seem like Harry had any intention of facing him anytime soon lol, im looking forward to their chat :)

    Author's Response: No, Harry would have preferred finding a deep hole to hide in rather than face Sev. You can see their talk now as I have posted the next part.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 12:13 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh?! WHAT?! YOU JUST GIVE US A CLIFFIE?! ARGH!!! Nos!! *sobs* Well, I liked that chapter (EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFIE)!

    Well done, please hurry to get more out!

    Author's Response: I will and I am! Go and see!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 9:56 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry. The guilt is going to strangle him. How's he ever going to get past this. I really hope that this ritual can make Severus and Harry whole again, and not feel like they're tainted.

    I love little Jilly, and Severus' thoughts about regretting not having a little daughter, was just too precious. Very sweet.

    I loved this chapter. You just really captured Severus' and Harry's emotions so well. I can just "feel" Harry's guilt, and Severus' confusion.

    Yes, a cliffie again!!! Oh well (she sighs) I guess that you'll just have to get those little fingers of yours writing, and pronto!! Please?

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry always has a tough time with his guilty conscience, especially given what he did to Severus.  The ritual is designed to do just that, if Sev can ever get Harry alone to perform it.

    Yes, but you know, if Severus ever got back together with Thea maybe he could have a daughter. It's something to think about. For a future story.

    Oh good, I struggled with this and worried that it wasn't descriptive enough.

    Well, I have updated again! So now you can get to reading, Pandora and thanks!


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