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Title: A True Apprentice 25 Aug 2009 9:45 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it all! Jilly is so cute and I love how Jace is so considerate of Harry's feelings. I hope that he can help harry convince Hedwig to get the dagger and maybe they can destroy it together. Waiting anxiouslt for the next.

    Author's Response: A very good idea and I thank you for your support. The next one has been posted.
Title: A True Apprentice 25 Aug 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    harry has learnt to brew potions from the best and with encouragement he should be as good as sev, i think jace should speak to harry about what was overheard and maybe between them they could get hedwig to revel the daggers location and they should keep harry from succuming to the daggers charms, sev will recover and then sev and harry should have a talk about what happened

    Author's Response: That's a really good idea and I shall consider it. I have the next chapter posted so you can see what becomes of the dagger. Thank you for all your reviews. Harry has indeed learned from the best in the field. And you're right, he could become Sev's equal in time.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 25 Aug 2009 12:35 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well at leat sev is in good hands and i hope that harry will help sev survive and that hedwig helps harry, and that grace can get all of the potion ingredients, remember the big stick

    Author's Response: I do remember . . .and harry will do his best to help Severus, he doesn't want him to die either. Grace is very determined and she also wishes to help Severus.  hedwig must be made to trust Harry somehow . . .I'm just not sure how yet. 
Title: Potion Master's Peril 25 Aug 2009 12:21 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    noooo you can't kill sev of, you can't do that to me, you are a nice author, not a horrible one, keep sev alive, as i will find out where you live and hunt you down with a big stick, hehehehe won't really.

    well i'm glad hedwig has alot of sense and took the dagger before harry did anything else with it

    Author's Response: Okay, I won't kill Sev . . .I don't want to be a horrible author. Or be killed either.
Title: A True Apprentice 25 Aug 2009 11:52 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the new family and their abilities! Great! One small thing - jill is not consistent, her speach and intellectual level differs through the chapter (not too much though). I cannot wait for more! Mila

    Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes Jilly imitates the speech of her elders and other times she lapses back into the speech of a two-year-old. I've seen this happen with my small nephews. It might seem strange, but it's because they're learning how to talk right and copy people. And she is a very bright young child, plus her Talent lets her understand things which a child her age often can't.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 10:43 pm
Reviewer: Aleu-n-Prongs (Signed) [Report This]
    The first thing that popped into my mind for destroying the dagger was Harry pouring a vial full of the curse dissolving potion into a cauldron outside in Jace's front yard. Then he leaves and goes back inside and Hedwig retrieves the dagger and drops it into the cauldron herself.

    Author's Response: Good idea! Thank you!
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Jilly!!!!! She's so sweet and seems to love everyone!! Hopefully Hedwig will realized that Harry is heartbroken over what has happened and bring the dager to the lab for him to destroy. Poor Harry.

    Author's Response: yes she does! Hedwig is not as insensitive to Harry's feelings as she seems, she knows he is very upset but at the same time is afraid the dagger will influence him again. But next chapter Harry will attempt to convince her he is all right.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    If Hedwig never trusts him, how is the dagger to be destroyed? I liked the chapter very much. It's not as tense as the past two to three chapters. You always know how to keep us on our seats though, even without a cliffie. I'm quite eager to read more.

    Author's Response: That's true and the next chapter will be about Harry regaining her trust. I'm glad you liked this one, but the next one will be pretty tense.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Go Harry! I am really proud of that little bonehead. I think he should show Hedwig the potion and have her drop it in, so he cannot touch it. Maybe have him not even be there, but be with Grace, working on saving Severus the moment it is destroyed.

    Author's Response: Good idea! Harry is really showing his true colors here and he'll show them even more next chapter. Thanks for your suggestion.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    whoops Jace found out, but his little sister didn't sense any dark about Harry? Maybe it's only active when the dagger is around? I really loved this scene:

    "Back to clean up. Severus would have my hide if I left his lab like that," Harry said, then froze. This was not Severus's lab and he was not watching his apprentice, waiting for him to remember his instructions. A sudden pang of sorrow smote him and he felt tears sting his eyes.

    It made me feel sorry for Harry, for a moment there nothing seemed out of place until he realized that this wasn't where he thought he was. =(
    I hope everything will be alright, please update when you can!
    *runs off to find a blanket* it's getting cold again T_T

    Author's Response: Yes, that scene really was heartbreaking. But perhaps things shall work out. You'll see next chapter.  As for Harry and the dagger, it'll be resolved next chapter as well.

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