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Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 12:07 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful as usual. I have so enjoyed this series.....poor Harry.....poor Sev....very good rescue. They should have taken Jace with them on this trip, then no problems with the weres! LOL I love Grace already, so kind and talented. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, they should have, except Jace couldn't fly as a hawk.  And who knew the weres were going to be so much trouble! Grace will be Harry's lifeline soon enough.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 20 Aug 2009 11:57 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pheew! That was close! Fantastic job though. I liked the idea of stasis cloak.

    Maybe if Harry makes the potion first and then talks to Hedwig about giving him the dagger? That might work. Grace can help Harry with the potion too.

    I really liked the way you have described the Witherspoon house. It brings back memories of peace and healing. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Good because I had to come up with something to keep Sev alive long enough for the potion to brew.

    Yes, that could work. Grace would be very willing to help him.

    I'm glad you liked the house, I wasn't sure if I did a good job with it or not.

Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 20 Aug 2009 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev'll be okay, he has to be. *cries*

    Author's Response: Harry will try his best to make him well.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 20 Aug 2009 11:27 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, now at least there's hope for Severus. I really hope that Hedwig can be convinced to let him have the dagger.

    Great chapter, and you've made me feel a little better, that there's still hope for Severus. I just hope that Harry can heal now, because guilt is going to ravish Harry. How will he ever get over almost killing Severus. Poor boy. Either way, rough times are ahead for Harry.

    Author's Response:

    She may take a bit more convincing than you'd think. 

    Yes, hope is now rising for Severus.

    Oh yes, that guilt is going to really hurt him, unless Severus is healed and convinces him to let it go, which will not be an easy thing.

Title: Potion Master's Peril 19 Aug 2009 3:56 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't you dare kill Sev, less you want an enraged anthro cat attempting to chew on you. I like this story, but I'll be very pissed if Sev dies just when Harry needs him.

    Author's Response: Okay, I'm seriously considering letting Sev live.  Because the prophecy still needs to be fulfilled and Harry really would kill himself if Severus died.
Title: Fallen 19 Aug 2009 3:48 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    ARRRRRG! *bounces up and down with fustration* You...you...clever author you! >

    Author's Response: Scary isn't it? But at least you can read the next chapter now!
Title: Potion Master's Peril 18 Aug 2009 1:20 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    You are an evil, evil woman! Two chapters in a row? How could you.

    Of course, they were the very best chapters!

    Author's Response: yes, aren't I terrible? IT MAKES YOU GO INSANE, RIGHT?
Title: Potion Master's Peril 18 Aug 2009 1:17 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, no! PLease, please, please let Sev live!!!! If he dies, there's no point in continuing the story because Harry will be lost forever.

    Please, please, please, promise me that you won't kill Severus!!!

    Sorry about all the exclamation marks but I'm thoroughly agitated at the moment (and it's all your fault, you excellent writer, you). Excuse me wile I open another box of Kleenex.

    More, please.

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    I can give you a box of it!

    I don't think I will have Severus die, though at one point I was considering it. Then again, I don't want to be fish bait.

    I havejust updated again, so you can see how Jace helps Harry and Severus.

Title: Potion Master's Peril 18 Aug 2009 6:02 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! You really let Harry stab him! Wow. Are you really considering the variant where Sev dies? m.

    Author's Response: yes, that was always in the plan. I may be, but . . .you won't know yet.
Title: Potion Master's Peril 17 Aug 2009 11:16 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, if you kill off Severus, how can the prophecy be fulfilled? They'd all be doomed to old Voldie returning and taking over...

    Author's Response: Tha is very true!

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