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Title: Potion Master's Peril 17 Aug 2009 12:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Don't you dare kill Severus!!!How can you even ask that?

    Oh, you left us hanging again. Aw, Poor Harry, please don't do this to him!

    Okay, so I'm at work here, with tears in the corner of my eye. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Aww! I'm touched.  Poor Harry and poor Sev, they are both teetering on the brink of destruction. Hopefully something can be done about it. 
Title: Potion Master's Peril 17 Aug 2009 11:26 am
Reviewer: garnettac (Signed) [Report This]
    End like a certain Halloween night? NO no no no.....please, it can't end that way, Severus has to get better, Harry has to help him get better, and then he has to help Harry get better. There has to be real light and a real end to this tunnel of dispair that doesn't involve anyone dying. That said, excellent story, excellent writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I will consider your words very carefully before deciding.  I have just updated and now you can find out what happened.
Title: Potion Master's Peril 17 Aug 2009 8:45 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Decide for yourself.

    Don't follow J. K. Rowling's example and flake under peer pressure. If you have it set in your mind to kill Severus, then, by the gods, kill him. If you have it set in your mind that he lives, then he lives. You're skilled enough to decide for yourself.

    If Severus lives, how will he and Harry continue to tolerate each other? Whether it was the dagger's fault, it was Harry that tried to kill him and that will be bound to leave a mark. How could Severus ever trust him again? The story cannot just go back to normal - that's impossible with Harry's actions.

    If Severus dies, Harry'll have to cope with that loss. He is no longer the innocent little boy; he has been swayed by the dark and who's to say it will not happen again? He cannot claim it was not his entire fault; a part of him must really have wanted Severus to die, otherwise he would have faught harder to prevent the manipulations of the blade.

    Decide for yourself.

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    yes, I am. And I will.

    I just have to decide which way it's going to go.

    Actually, there was no way for Harry to avoid the dagger's possession. The dagger is an old old evil, it has been around for thousands of years and many good men and women, wizard and non-wizard have fallen to its spell. It knew exactly what it was doing when it cut open Harry's face.  It couldn't penetrate Sev's mind unless he touched it skin to skin and even then it would have had a hard time, so it went for the easier and more vulnerable prey.

    Once that cut was made, and Harry barely even knew it was there, gotten as it was in the heat of battle and he was cut already from flying splinters, the dagger's poison began to work on him. Subtly and slowly, so that he had no idea what was happening. He wasn't holding the dagger and neither of them knew the dagger could influence people's minds that way. It knew just how to manipulate Harry so Harry would agree, in the dream, to protect it.  Once that link was made, Harry was snared.  And he didn't even know it.  When he stabbed Severus, he was still asleep, being manipulated by the dagger, and it was as if he was sleepwalking when he attacked Sev.  As soon as he woke, he was horrified.

    Whether or not Sev will forgive him, if he lives, is another story.

Title: Potion Master's Peril 17 Aug 2009 2:05 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Erm, remind me, who's Jace Witherspoon? I didn't forget, persay... It just ran away from my brain. :p

    Author's Response: He's the young Slytherin who harry helped that was being tormented by Draco.
Title: Fallen 16 Aug 2009 3:50 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    You said in your author's note a couple of chapters back that the Dagger was a lot like Tolkien's The One Ring. Actually, in some ways I think the Dagger is worse than that. It's definitely literally bloodthirsty and while the Ring just messed with its bearer's mind, it's prime directive was to get itself back to it's Master ASAP. From what I can see the Dagger is Evil made physically manifest, evil that specifically wants bloodshed. I can see more than a couple ways things could go from here but I'm betting you are going to surprise me yet again. Excellent imagery and characterization as always. Bravo!

    Author's Response: yes, you are absolutely right. The Dagger is much wickeder than the One Ring and it lives to kill and subvert innocents. Harry really had no defense against it, it was made even more powerful by Voldy putting a piece of his corrupt soul into it.  Hope you like how things continue!
Title: Fallen 16 Aug 2009 11:33 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How does Sev protect himself against the daggar? Please don't keep us waiting to long to find out. Great chapter. When do they get to hogwarts?

    Author's Response: He couldn't.  They might not get there just yet.  I have just updated.
Title: Fallen 16 Aug 2009 10:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nooooooo!

    Author's Response: Terrible, isn't it?
Title: Fallen 16 Aug 2009 4:40 am
Reviewer: Tuttie Frutti (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! SEV NO!!!!!!!! I'm so worried. *sniff* I'm not going to kill you, Sev needs to be injured again, the whole reason I read this and your other fics, well written and Sev gets hurt. lol Keep writing!!!!!

    Author's Response: And he's hurt badly this time.  And maybe he won't recover and maybe he will. 
Title: Fallen 16 Aug 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    :-) Poor Severus. I hope you update soon. Mila

    Author's Response: I know, I'm so rough on the poor guy.  I have updated!
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 8:31 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    NO! Oh please not this!

    Harry, you poor kid, why did you not tell Severus about the dreams???

    That dagger needs to be burned up in a volcano or thrown into the ocean. Damn Tom Riddle!

    Author's Response:

    Damn him indeed!

    He didn't know they were anything more than dreams.


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