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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
I think my heart has stopped. That was the nastiest ending ever! You can't have Sev die! please it would destroy everything! Please let him live! And for mercy's sake, please update quickly! Author's Response: Okay I will consider it. I will try believe me!
Thanks for the chapter and now I will wait for the next one with even less patience lol Author's Response: I will try and write really fast so you can find out what happens.
Author's Response: Okay . . .maybe I won't.
U GOT A 1 CUZ THAT WAS THE MOST EVIL CLIFFIE EVER! Author's Response: Okay . . .I don't hate you . . .I just love to keep you guessing!
How in God's mighty name, if Severus survives, will he ever forgive Harry for trying to /kill/ him? It's one thing to be ensnared by a charmed dark object; it's another entirely to try and kill your mentor! That dagger really does have a will of its own and that's dangerous - this chapter proves it. As Mr. Weasley says, "Never trust anything that can think for itself if /you can't see where it keeps its brain/". And Potter should know; the bloody git was there. Kathy. Why do I have the feeling that you are going to kill Severus? May be because... It will be the only way to teach Harry a lesson. It will teach him humility and a guilt he has never before experienced. It will teach him to ask for true forgiveness. And it will teach him to grow up; that he is no longer just a child any more. I sense the next chapter will be a crucial turning point in the story. As well as a mighty tragedy. Try not to keep us waiting too long. Always yours, Jewels. Author's Response: Kill Sev . . .??? Um . . .. I won't want to do that, but well we'll see. Yes, it will be a large turning point.
Brilliant, but OMG!! How is Harry going to get over the guilt of this? Whether Sev lives or dies. Oh, I hope you write as quickly as usual. Author's Response: It's going to take a lot of forgiveness on both their parts. I will be writing quickly, because I want to see what happens too.
Author's Response: Okay okay, I'm typing! LOL!
Author's Response: yes, I know but I have updated again so you can read what happens next!
Author's Response: I don't know. It just seemed appropriate to end it there.
Author's Response: Yes . . .they do and you're right! |
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