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Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 7:43 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    OH MY GOD!

    I think my heart has stopped.

    That was the nastiest ending ever!

    You can't have Sev die! please it would destroy everything! Please let him live!

    And for mercy's sake, please update quickly!

    Author's Response:

    Okay I will consider it.

    I will try believe me!

Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 3:17 pm
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    I might forgive you for the horrible cliffie but you better find a way for Severus to live :p

    Thanks for the chapter and now I will wait for the next one with even less patience lol

    Author's Response: I will try and write really fast so you can find out what happens. 
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 2:16 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No. You wouldn't. Please?

    Author's Response: Okay . . .maybe I won't.
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 11:23 am
Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WHHHHYYYYYYYYY??? WHY DO YOU HATE US???
    U GOT A 1 CUZ THAT WAS THE MOST EVIL CLIFFIE EVER!

    Author's Response: Okay . . .I don't hate you . . .I just love to keep you guessing!
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 11:04 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Where's a damn vampire when you need one?!?!

    How in God's mighty name, if Severus survives, will he ever forgive Harry for trying to /kill/ him? It's one thing to be ensnared by a charmed dark object; it's another entirely to try and kill your mentor! That dagger really does have a will of its own and that's dangerous - this chapter proves it. As Mr. Weasley says, "Never trust anything that can think for itself if /you can't see where it keeps its brain/". And Potter should know; the bloody git was there.

    Kathy.

    Why do I have the feeling that you are going to kill Severus?

    May be because... It will be the only way to teach Harry a lesson. It will teach him humility and a guilt he has never before experienced. It will teach him to ask for true forgiveness. And it will teach him to grow up; that he is no longer just a child any more.

    I sense the next chapter will be a crucial turning point in the story. As well as a mighty tragedy.

    Try not to keep us waiting too long.

    Always yours,
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Kill Sev . . .???

    Um . . .. I won't want to do that, but well we'll see.

    Yes, it will be a large turning point.

Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 10:43 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm at a loss for words.

    Brilliant, but OMG!! How is Harry going to get over the guilt of this? Whether Sev lives or dies.

    Oh, I hope you write as quickly as usual.

    Author's Response:

    It's going to take a lot of forgiveness on both their parts.

    I will be writing quickly, because I want to see what happens too.

Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 10:26 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    But, wait! What just happened?! ARGH!!! Please type quickly!

    Author's Response: Okay okay, I'm typing! LOL!
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 8:59 am
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If I ever saw a mean cliffy - this is the it!!! Anyway, I love it and hope you'll update soon.

    Author's Response: yes, I know but I have updated again so you can read what happens next!
Title: Fallen 15 Aug 2009 8:04 am
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I will hex however not with avada. Why so short chapter?

    Author's Response: I don't know. It just seemed appropriate to end it there.
Title: Tempted 15 Aug 2009 6:49 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! They need to get away from the werewolves and destroy the darn dagger. Before something worse happens. And I have a feeling (again) that something worse WILL happen. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Yes . . .they do and you're right!

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