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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: Thanks! I just posted the next chapter, so now you can be put out of your misery, LOL!
::pulls out gun:: I hate zombies, have I mentioned that before? ::shudders:: This was difficult to read. I enjoyed the training session with Severus and Harry; why does Dumbledore have to ruin the moment and lay more pressure upon them? The old bugger cannot take a hint, can he? And Voldemort. He was one messed up child, that's for damn sure. I'll fight him so long as he's not surrounded by the undead and Philip is by my side. Do you enjoy freaking out your readers? Zombies, zombies, zombies... I hate them, I really do. I'll take Megatron or Sauron any day of the week; anything but the undead! This once, I really don't think I want you to update quickly... Author's Response: Nope. He can't. Yes, he really was a messed up thing, always was and always will be. He needs to be taken out. I know you hate zombies, I don't like them either. Just be glad you were never forced to watch Resident Evil. Of course, it's fun! Now go and read about how Harry and Sev blast them off the face of the earth.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked my clever device, the dagger is a very sly and cunning opponent. I have, the next part is up now!
Author's Response: Guilty. Mea culpa! *holds hands up* I just posted the next one so now you can see what happens. And I'm off to review Runner since I was in the middle of a review when my Windows updated all of a sudden and I lost it.
The only thing I didn't like . . .you ended it on a cliffie! Update again, I'm waiting with bated breath! Author's Response: I have updated and am happy that my advice from Sev to Harry is correct. i salute you and all our other men and women who serve in our armed forces. Thanks for reading!
This part was so intense and I loved the way Severus reassured Harry about the battle magic and Hedwig's talk also. Your attention to detail is amazing. Author's Response: Thanks! I try hard to make the reader see, hear, and feel what the characters do. Okay, don't lose it, I've updated!
Author's Response: You're welcome and I have updated again, so don't worry!
Author's Response: You do?? But they're so much FUN . . .for me that is. You are? Good, stay there, because there are more cliffies to come. Just don't fall off!
Okay, so that was very well done, the conversation about how Severus felt ill after the first time he killed someone. I can't imagine how Harry is going to cope when HE kills someone for the first time. Poor Harry, he is going to find it very difficult. OOh, those inferi are really creepy, aren't they? Author's Response: No! Don't die, Pandora! Then who wil review my stories??? Gives a Restorative Draft. I wanted to write that conversation between Sev & Harry for awhile, because I felt it was important that the two of them discuss what it was like to have to kill in self-defense and how it leaves a person scarred, no matter what. That's an important issue for any would-be soldier to learn about and Harry is like a soldier in this war, a new recruit who needs an experienced mentor to show him the ropes and reassure him that what he feels is normal. I thought it made Sev more human and less cold to share his own experiences with Harry so he could understand the price of war. Oh God, the kid's going to be a mess, but Sev will help him get through it, that's what he's there for. yes as they are meant to be. I sure wouldn't want to see one . . .even in my dreams! *shivers*
Author's Response: Hurry and read the next chapter so you can find out! Thanks for reading! |
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