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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 12:25 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    must have update soon.....i love this story

    Author's Response: You're command has been noted and processed! Here is your update! :)
Title: Orphanage on the Hill 09 Aug 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    To stop there is just plain MEAN!! But as it was a good long and interesting chapter I suppose you can get away with it...

    Author's Response:

    I hope so, LOL!

    Hope you like the next part!

Title: Decoy 08 Aug 2009 3:34 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done Hedwig! I love the character you've given her in this story, and how she does her best to mother the two hawks. I like how a little post owl has as much input for the success of the mission (hope I'm not being unduly optimistic there) as a full grown wizard.

    Author's Response: No, Hedwig was always meant to play an important role in the story, I think she was undersued in the books and then to be killed off that way--it was so unfair! I think that both Harry and Sev could use a bit of mothering-Harry especially--and with the owl they can't really object . . .much!
Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 07 Aug 2009 9:08 am
Reviewer: caro (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the storyline of this and the previous story, but I do think you could do with having a 'Britpicker' to help you avoid using words and phrases that sound too American as obviously Harry and Sev are British. It's just a little distracting at times when they use words like 'dumbass' which you really wouldn't find a British person saying. Having said that I am really enjoying the fic so hope you update soon.

    Author's Response: Oh sorry, I didn't realize I had done that.  I have updated and hope you like the way the battle goes.
Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 05 Aug 2009 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooh. Very curious. A dagger that powerful shouldn't just be limited to skin touch I should think. I loved Harry's impudence in this chapter. Very tension relieving. He's too cute :)

    Author's Response:

    Well, it isn't exactly.  As you'll see as the story progresses, the dagger has its own awareness, think of the One Ring in Lord of the Rings and you'll get the Dagger's personality.  It lives to cause mayhem and will use whatever vessel comes along. 

    Yeah, Harry is just too cute, especially when he's around Sev.

Title: Decoy 05 Aug 2009 9:48 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Skree skree skree!!!! Thank goodness you didn't leave it on a cliffie. *nearly passes out due to the excitment* Yeesh!

    Author's Response: I thought about it . . .then I said, no I need to SAVE the cliffie.  So . . .be prepared.  There will be one coming!
Title: Decoy 05 Aug 2009 3:02 pm
Reviewer: Alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! Wonderful!!! I so love your stories!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much and hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 05 Aug 2009 2:44 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope so! That Tom sure was a rotten apple and scary too! But then considering what he became . . .I'm not surprised. I loved how Harry and Sev were at the end and the Dagger sounds like a serious bit of trouble. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks and you're right on all counts. The next few chapters are going to be, shall we say, exciting! Or maybe terrifying?
Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 05 Aug 2009 12:35 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    That was very creepy. I think you captured Riddle's personality perfectly. He really was a sociopath and it shows.

    The Dagger sounds very dangerous and I'm worried about Trelwaney's prediction. I hope nothing bad happens to them!

    I loved Severus's last line, "Pleasant dreams, my impudent brat." Perfect!

    Author's Response:

    he was it was scary! I wouldn't ever want to meet him.

    The dagger is dangerous and you're right to be worried. 

    Aww, thanks!

Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 05 Aug 2009 12:28 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the banter the end, and you're right, it did lighten the mood a bit because those revelations about how evil Tom was even at the tender age of nine, is really creepy and disturbing.


    Phew, I need to calm down now, that vision of the rabbit freaked me out. Great chapter though. I'm curious to see more of Trelawney's predictions come true.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, i thought it needed some thing to lighten the mood and so I didn't go to bed feeling the way I do after reading Stephen King, all shivery.  I wanted to show Tom as having a really disturbing outlook, like a sociopath.

    I know, writing about that scared me too. I hate people who hurt animals, but in my psych class that's one of the signs of a sociopath and a murderer, that they kill or torture animals when they are young.  And it was mentioned in HBP too.  Trelawney will continue to surprise herself and hopefully everyone else too.


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