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Title: Growing Up Tom Riddle 04 Aug 2009 11:26 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. It was creepy, but didn't really come across like it. It came across more as... interesting, perhaps? Yeah, lets go with that. ^^

    I love Snape proving Harry right. xDD

    Author's Response:

    Okay interesting as well as creepy works for me. 

    That was my favorite part too. 

Title: Decoy 04 Aug 2009 5:03 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i knew hedwig could do it, she is one hell of a good owl, hands hedwig some owl treats, though i was the teensiest bit worried about her and the course of action she chose

    Author's Response:

    hedwig thanks you!

    But she knew what she was doing.  She's such a sweet and brave girl.

    I've just updated this so you can read about their new adventures.

Title: Pursuit 04 Aug 2009 4:42 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sev is right about harry putting meadowsweet to the back of his mind and carry on with the quest. great fight from warrier and hedwig, saw them of but they have returned with werewolve in tow, it doesn't look good, espescially in the middle of rome

    Author's Response:

    Yes, in order to defeat Voldy for the last time, he has to stay focused and distractions can be deadly.

    No, but at least they are under cover. 

    If you read the next part you'll see how they manage to get out of it.

Title: Decoy 04 Aug 2009 4:16 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for Hedwig! She's an awesome familiar and I love how she is a major part of the story. I am so glad she didn't die.

    Sev/Warrior's words about losing companions in war and continuing missions to honor the sacrifice of said companions was dead on target though. Harry/Freedom should take them to heart. Can't wait for the next update!!

    Author's Response:

    I love Hedwig. She's such fun to write.

    Good, because I've known soldiers who have returned from Iraq, namely my sister, who have told me that.  He will, believe me.  Here's the next chapter.

Title: Herbology Lessons 04 Aug 2009 3:59 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great to see the crabbes, i can't quite picture vincent on a horse, he doesn't seem the type, but would like to know more of there family, marietta will be good for him and his sister seems sort of a cool person.

    its all raging hormones down in the woods

    Author's Response:

    well it was a pony, years ago, and he hasn't ridden since then.  You'll learn more about the Crabbes and Marietta's family too. 

    Oh yes, it sure is, LOL!

Title: The Request 04 Aug 2009 2:24 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    do i detect abit of romance in the air between harry and meadowsweet, its kind of cute, so glad that the dark evil curse has been eradicated and that they are welcome in to the fold, but the task of convincing fudge will not be a easy one and with the werewolves still roaming the area they arn't safe safe there

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, you do!

    No and that will be a tough thing to convince Fudge to not only admit he was wrong but admit it in the forst place. 

    True and soon they will have to leave.

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Decoy 03 Aug 2009 7:28 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the chapter and am glad you didn't kill her off. :-)

    Author's Response: I just couldn't I hated that part in DH.  So I would never do that in my work.  Now you can check out what else is in store for them.
Title: Decoy 03 Aug 2009 3:05 pm
Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Great and here's the next one for you!
Title: Decoy 02 Aug 2009 3:06 pm
Reviewer: YEY (Anonymous) [Report This]
    go hedwig great chapter
    so happy hedwig didn't die
    can't wait for the next chappter

    Author's Response:

    Thanks I think hedwig deserved to live and couldn't bear to let her go.

    The next chapter's up now!

Title: Decoy 02 Aug 2009 7:38 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    You had me very scared there for awhile. I was afraid Hedwig was going to die. Excellent work, as usual!

    Author's Response: No I just couldn;t do that to Harry.  It'd be too much. Thanks!

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