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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 8:50 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this chapter was awesome, trees that move, kind of creepy, beware in forests and woods, you never know if a tree is following your every move.

    now how many casualties do we have, sev, harry and hedwig, well i hope they al;l get well soon and find the next hor.. well i mean thingymabob

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, especially in THAT one!

    Uh yeah all three have been injured. 

    They have the next forbidden object, now Darkmoon has to help them destroy it. 

    Check out the next chapter to see what happens.

Title: Mist and Shadows 18 Jul 2009 7:59 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, good to see whats happening elsewhere in the world, grimmauld place did need redecorating and i'm pleasedc that sirius is doing something constructive with his time.

    Author's Response: Yeah I figured everyone was wondering what on earth happened to Siri now and he is starting to mature finally and get himself together.
Title: Sylvanor's Children 18 Jul 2009 7:36 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter, gl;ad that the werewolves got chased away but they are still out there somewhere. sev and harry need all the help they can get from the wolfen, they seem a very nice pack once they had overcome there initial suspiscions, a great ally to have. the ministry should be ashamed of themselves, making them live in a forest but they seem to be doing alright. hedwig will be ok, she's a fighter that owl

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, don;t count them out yet.  They'll be back!!

    yes they are really good allies to have in a fight or as friends.

    The Ministry is filled with dunderheads and ostriches. 

    She sure is!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 7:34 pm
Reviewer: Caecillia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    zomg this is super intense. i love it! update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Here is more!
Title: In the Forest of the Night 18 Jul 2009 7:16 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i think the wolfen are friendly, they are just protecting there territory, once they have found out that sev and harry arn't going to attack them all should be well, maybe they could attack fenrir and his motley crew instead. get one over on malfoy and co. i do hope they get the thingymabob

    Author's Response: They are very much protecting what is theirs and they sure hate Fenrir and co.  You'll find out why next chapter.
Title: A Wicked Gathering 18 Jul 2009 7:06 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    sorry i havn't read in a long while but been away and catching up on fan fic, why does everyone seem to know i will be away from a comp and all decide to update at the same time.

    snape and harry had better watch out now that there secret is out, i wish them all the luck in the world, they need some liquid luck, but they will be flying mostly and maybe there eye sight will be better when in bird form

    Author's Response:

    Uh . . .because we want to drive you crazy? LOL!

    Yes, they will need some but they already have a head start. Fly, hawks, fly!

    So glad you came back to read more!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 6:05 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great chapter. Darkmoon is a good OC, I like him very much. Mila

    Author's Response: yay! A Darkmoon supporter! I think he's cool, if I do say so myself.
Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 2:48 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder will happen to the trees now that Harry and Severus took the Staff?

    Author's Response: You'll find out if you read my next posted chapter!
Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 1:09 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! I really like the atmosphere you have created, it's authentic and the conversation between Darkmoon and Harry is also sweet. The battle and the black forest remind me of Tolkien. Very well done.

    I am eager to read the rest!

    Author's Response:

    Brilliant! More has been posted.  Glad you caught the similarities to Tolkien becuase that's what I was aiming for.

    Darkmoon and Harry will bond more in future chapters. Thanks for reading!

Title: That Which Is Hidden 18 Jul 2009 9:45 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    How is Darkmoon going to deal with two casualties? I hope that he can heal them both, and or get them to safety.

    How old are the wolfen. It's very sad that they are alone, with no one to take care of them.

    I loved what Harry did with the trees. How did he even think to do that?

    Hmm...so I get a Felix Felicis. Great, I've had a rough week at work, could use some good luck!!

    Does that mean, that you'll update soon?

    Author's Response:

    He will try his best to protect them, he is very good at it.

    They are anywhere between 15-19 years of age. yes but hopefully something can be done about it eventually.

    He just acted on instinct and logic and it worked.

    Good, because so could I!

    yes, and as a matter of fact, I have!


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