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Title: Sylvanor's Children 04 Jul 2009 4:28 am
Reviewer: Ginny Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    No!I don't want Hedwig to die... But the wolfen were cool. They remind me of the werewolves in Twilight. Except that in Twilight when they're really angry they change aswell. I think Hedwig will survive but will be blind in one eye. But please don't use that idea. It just makes sense.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I won;t kill her and she won;t be blind in one eye.  Promise.

    They are similar but different as well. 

    You can learn some more about them in my latest update that I've just posted. Thanks for R &R ing.

Title: Sylvanor's Children 03 Jul 2009 8:27 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    The Ministry needs their heads examined. Throwing away children is a crime.

    I think the wolfen are great though Vlad could cause trouble. Hope he gets it thru his stubborn head that Harry and Severus are FRIENDS and not enemies.

    Poor Hedwig. Fix her Meadowsweet!

    Author's Response:

    It is and they sure do.

    he will eventually.

    Okay, she'll be working on it!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 03 Jul 2009 7:58 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant! The wolfen are very interesting and I love how you described their homes. I hope that Meadowsweet can save Hedwig, the poor owl! I think she might've been the victim of a curse.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I liked making them part of my story and am eager to know how everyone likes them. Meadowsweet will try and you could be right.  I have just updated.
Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 2:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, that was a powerful chapter. I must admit, that I'm very intrigued by the Wolvens' home among the trees! How fascinating.

    There story is really heartbreaking. Imagine abandoning young children, and leaving them to fend for themselves.

    Author's Response: They really have a good society, considering what they were left to accomplish on their own.  The Ministry officials really screwed this one up and someday it'll come back and bite them in the butt. 
Title: Sylvanor's Children 01 Jul 2009 10:12 am
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    That bastard Grey back hurt Hegwig! Boy is he in for it now!

    If I'm wrong, maybe she tried to rest in the trees holding the horcrux?

    I love the way you're going with the wolfen, great chappie!

    Donna :)

    Author's Response:

    Good guesses, but I can;t tell you which is right.  Don't want to spoil the next chapter! :D

    You'll be seeing a lot more of the wolfen, 'specially Darkmoon, in upcoming chapters!

Title: Sylvanor's Children 30 Jun 2009 9:58 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, no!! Poor Hedwig!! I dunno what happened to her eyes.

    I like the world you've created, here. It reminds me of Robin Hood and his band of Merry Men, sort of, though Vlad is clearly trouble. I also like the sort of 'organic' magic they have, without the weird spells and stuff. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Something that is bad, as you'll see.

    That's true, I kind of had them in mind when I wrote this.  Remember Robin Hood Prince of Thieves? They lived in trees too. 

    Vlad is trouble, though he won't betray them to the werewolves.

    yes, they have natural magic, and it is stronger than the kind  most wizards have. 

Title: Sylvanor's Children 30 Jun 2009 6:52 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Of course she will.

    Well, well, well. Lots and lots of angst and tension! Kathy, I do not know how you manage to continue impressing me but you do. The interaction between Harry and your original characters is believable and a delight to read. I've simply fallen in love with Meadowsweet! Darkmoon is impressive as well as intimidating - I wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley.

    I loved your descriptions and the beautiful community you created. It sounded so real, I wanted to reach out and touch it! Ah well... I can dream.

    Keep smiling and keep writing!

    And I owe you for the snippet up top. ;-)

    Hugs,

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that's what makes it interesting. 

    Meadowsweet is one of my favorites too.  Darkmoon is very alpha, but he can also be kind and gentle if need be. 

    I'd like to live in it.  Wouldn't you?

    Thanks and I will try! Keep reading, okay? :)

Title: Sylvanor's Children 30 Jun 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    See, I COULD take a guess at what happened to Hedwig, but I have no idea, so it would be pointless. I like the wolfen society. They seem to be rather pack oriented, like I thought they might be. I'd like for Harry to croon a lullaby to Hedwig. It would be terribly sweet for him to do that.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, it'll be explained next chapter.

    great.  They are quite pack orientated, as makes sense for those of their dual nature.

    Aww, now that really would be cute!

Title: In the Forest of the Night 30 Jun 2009 2:31 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, seems they’re in a tight spot right now! Hopefully the wolfen will allow them to continue their mission. And maybe they'll keep Greyback and the others off their backs as well?

    Once again I'm reminded of how badly I'd love to visit Italy :) Harry and Sev are so lucky to be enjoying all these great sites along their trip/mission. They deserve to though with what they're setting out to do! Which has only been made all the harder with Lucius and the others onto them...

    Author's Response:

    Yes, they're in a bit of one, until they explain more about why they're here.  That could happen, good prediction.

    Oh Italy is so lovely, there are no words I can use to adequately describe it.  I was there 9 years ago and I still remember it like it was yesterday. 

    Those two do deserve it and it's too bad they didn;t have more of a vacation, but . . .they will once the mission's over. 

    Lucius and Bella, yes, they will make things very difficult for our heroes and their friends . . .especially their friends . . .

Title: In the Forest of the Night 29 Jun 2009 10:31 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the wolfen ill be friend. They might be even more angry because there is a pack of real werewolves on the edge of the forest! Anyways, I'll tke a butterbeer, and some smarties (for brain power!). I think in some story Snape should try muggle candy. It would be quite funny.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's true.  The wolfen do not like Greyback's wolves. 

    here you go . . .enjoy it!

    You know, I just might take you up on that idea . . .it would be really funny!  Maybe it might work in my Never Again series?


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