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Title: A Wicked Gathering 24 Jun 2009 4:00 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, so many disgusting people in one chapter! It is really scary. Mila

    Author's Response:

    It sure is! *shivers dramatically*

     

    Now I need some choclate.

    Gotta run and get some! Bye!

Title: A Wicked Gathering 23 Jun 2009 10:42 am
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bellatrix is an amazing villainess and I'm sure she must be fun to write. I greatly enjoyed the friction between her and her sister; Lucius intrigued me. I never would have thought that he would become 'business' partners with Fenrir Greyback. That werewolf is nothing like Bran...

    Well, they were bound to figure out it was Severus sooner rather than later. It's truly a shame for these three Death Eaters: Sev and Harry are three steps ahead of them. I'm curious, though, how will Dracula and Urchin react to the werewolves entering their territory?

    Thanks for the complement on my dress. It's rare that I actually feel beautiful and that night I did.

    Keep smiling and keep writing!

    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah she is and I like writing her.  She will be around more in later chapters, she isn;t done with her wicked plotting just yet.  Lucius will do business with the devil if it benefited him, he's just that kind of guy. No Fenrir is Bran's antithesis. 

    Yeah don;t you feel bad for them?? NOT!

    Oh you'll see how everyone reacts soon. 

    You're so welcome, Jewels! You deserve it!

     

    Always,

    Kathy :)

Title: A Wicked Gathering 23 Jun 2009 10:36 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Crap. I really don't want Harry and Severus hurt, and it seems like they will be. Dx I hate when my favortie characters get hurt!

    Author's Response: They might be, but they won't die, that much I can promise you.   
Title: A Wicked Gathering 23 Jun 2009 6:26 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    OmG!! That was too scary. They know Snape's secret. OOh, now I'm nervous. That Greyback is creepy.

    Oh, I hope that Snape puts them all in their places. One good outcome of this, once they are all put in Azkaban, is that Snape can just be Harry's guardian now. He doesn't have to pretend anymore.

    oh, please update soon. That was a cliffie my girl. Oh and of course it great!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, unfortunately for poor Severus.

    Greyback is very creepy and evil and he's going to be a thorn in their sides for awhile.

    Yes, that is so true, once all the DE are behind bars or dead, Severus can just be Harry's guardian and a teacher, no more spying.

    It was and I'm glad you liked it.  I'll try and update soon!

Title: A Wicked Gathering 23 Jun 2009 1:40 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Woot bad guys. I like how you portrayed Greyback. Very savage. :-) I like how he reads dominance as more of a dog than a human.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I felt that he was more like an old time werewolf in the movies, motivated by his savage nature and reacting to things more as an animal than a human sometimes.  He's very wicked and bloodthirsty and you'll be seeing more of him soon . . .though I doubt you'd want to meet him anywhere.  I certainly wouldn't.
Title: A Long Way Away 22 Jun 2009 9:45 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I tell you, Kathy, I can't get enough of Warrior and Freedom. I love the interaction between the two; it really seems like they're more than just mentor and apprentice. Hedwig is also enjoyable to read - she has a personality unto herself! I love reading the three of them together; although, Warrior is a bit of an idiot... Come on, Hedwig, sing the man a lullaby! Be brave, girl!

    Harry getting sick simply added a touch of class to the chapter. A story would not be complete without a character getting sick; it's easy to relate too as well (I should know, I've been sick a LOT this year).

    Your idea for Lucius sounds intriguing. You don't need to ask me what I think - though I'm greatly honored that you value my opinion in such a way. The idea simply sends chills down my spine; an evil aristrocratic villain is one thing but your spin... I can't wait!

    I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter, my dear; it is going to be brilliant! And better yet - no one'll be expecting it! ::laughs evilly::

    Don't forget to update Return to Prince Manor! I love my Philip a little too much to wait much longer. . . ::winks::

    Lots of hugs from
    Jewels.

    Author's Response:

    They are, they're more like father and son, with Hedwig filling in occasionally as a mother/familiar role.  Hedwig might eventually get up enough confidence to sing Sev a lullaby, when he's sick or something, LOL.

    Yes, Lucius is very creepy and he'll be even creepier still in the next chapter.

    Of course I value your opinion, Jewels. You are honest and give me good ideas to use.

    I'll be updating PM next, so don;t fret too much!

    *hugs back*

    Snapegirl

Title: A Long Way Away 20 Jun 2009 11:33 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the nick names you come up with =)
    Master Grim and Stoic. Poor Harry getting sick T_T. Also the last part when Sev wouldn't tell what it was, I was guessing snails lol! Ah Sea Snails aren't bad, though I don't ever want to eat a garden snail ewww. lol

    Author's Response:

    Aren't they funny? I liked them very much! I think that one suits Severus.

    Yes, snails are a delicacy in France and also in Italy. 

    Hope you enjoy the next update I just posted.

Title: Hawks At Play 20 Jun 2009 9:07 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    "Mistress Softfeather" lol

    Author's Response: Yes, there's another of my good ones.  It's such a joy to create those names for Hedwig and Severus.
Title: Hawks At Play 20 Jun 2009 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, I loved the humor of this chapter. I especially liked when Harry called Severus "old," "It's okay, Easter bunny, I'm not hungry just yet," and Hedwig talking about a conspiracy when she was woken up. Very nice work--a light-hearted chapter was perfect to break up all the angst.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Harry does have plenty of cheek in him, doesn't he?

    Don;t know where I came up with the easter bunny line, it just appeared in my head.

    Yeah, Hedwig can be grumpy when awakened suddenly, like most birds and Potions Masters, LOL!

Title: On Edge 20 Jun 2009 4:34 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...so, when Remus and Tonks were talking about Greyback, could that possibly be foreshadowing for our two heroes? Will they encounter him?

    I did enjoy Padfoot's little romp through the park--cute!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    They might . . .I can't give that away just yet, but if you read my latest post, you'll get a kind of answer.

    I love watching dogs play! So cute!


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