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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
sev was great when harry was ill, i had the flu in my teens and i felt bloomin awful for a week, so i did feel for harry. i want some of that soup they had, its sounds really nice Author's Response: Yes they do now, but not back in 1995, when this takes place. Me too, I really like them. Oh yes, and now there's an even more dangerous flu going around, the swine flu, I heard on the radio that a kid died from it in NJ, where I come from. Horrible! That chicken and wild rice soup is based upon a real soup they serve at B&N cafe where I work, it tastes heavenly and I wish they sold it to us, I'd buy ten pouches of it. Now I'm starving, LOL!
Author's Response: Yes, it was needed after all the angst and action of the previous ones. Harry did wonderful and I'd kill her all over again just for you, kreacher! :D
I loved the part where Hedwig cleaned Harry and then sung a lullaby to him. Too too cute. And Severus' looking shocked that Hedwig wanted to do it to him too!!! I would have loved to see that! Oh, RPM next. Goodie. Can't wait!! Author's Response: It is really sad and the Dursleys are so wicked for not even giving him care when he was sick . . .believe it or not there really are people like that in the world, horrible people, I encountered some of them when I worked at an abuse center for a few months and read some more case files. Those made me sick, because they were actually true and not made up. A lot of how I write the dastardly Dursleys are based on them . . .shivers. Yeah, Hedwig is very motherly towards her fledgling wizard, smiles. Yeah, maybe Hedwig will get up the nerve to groom him someday. Wouldn't that be hilarious??? Coming soon, so stay tuned!
~Fern Author's Response: No, there will be a great deal of danger coming, from unecpected directions. Thanks for reading, as always.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a trip when he's not feeling well.
I loved the reference to William Blake's poem "Tyger, tyger!" it shows that Voldy was at least educated enough to manipulate classic literature for his own use. Brilliant! I loved how Harry and Sev played, Sev is really getting into being a good role model and guardian. Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it! You recognized the poem refrence!! Wow! I was sure nobodu except another English teacher or major would get that. Great job!! You get 50 House Points!! He is learning and doing well at it.
Hedwig was great too! Author's Response: Me too! I liked that part and am glad you do as well! Love Hedwig!
Why do you make me fall in love with your stories, Kathy? Warrior and Freedom were amazing together. I truly love it when the two of them can play together as hawks and, for a while, at least, be free of a heavy burden. As always, Hedwig is simply a dream to read; I never would have thought of giving her her own personality. A unique but welcome twist! I am so terribly sorry about your cousin! You must miss her terribly. I love my cousins deeply and I don't know what I'd do if anything happened to them. You poor dear, you've had to deal with so much pain and sorrow! I hope you truly believe that, although she may be gone, she will always be in your heart. Keep smiling even through your tears. Know that you are loved and cherished and your cousin will always a remain a part of you. Hugs and kisses, Jewels. Author's Response: Umm . . .because I'm supposed to? At least I think I am! yes, that was why I wrote this chapter, because they both needed to let off some steam. I love writing her and you'll get more of her in the next chapter.
Thanks for that, Julie. I know she is watching from up there and probably reading too!
And I've updated again! Hugs,
Kathy
Author's Response: So do I! I've updated again and you can have more flying!
Author's Response: Yes, she should be a good candidate for the heavenly choir or whatever. Thanks, it really helps and I've updated again! |
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