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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
and severus is a genius! next part? erg harry gets to write whole paragraph of lines and an essay of why birds don't fly in stormy weather? i guess i'll find out soon enough. Author's Response: Yeah, Harry just wasn;t thinking here. Severus is a genius of course! Hmm . . .you'll see soon enough! Thanks for the ideas!
this chapter was a rush when i read it =) i thought it was a person or something living in hear when i read the word match, never thought of a hellhound. that was a big surprise! Author's Response: That's really funny! Yeah, that hellhound was scary, wasn't it? It surprised Harry and Severus too!
Author's Response: Oh yes, that's exactly right. Craxy old man, LOL!
"fruity?! i say mr. potter you've out done yourself. i truly believed you would have preferred chocolate flavored." LOL i'm kidding =) Author's Response: Thanks1 I really love it! yeah, isn;t it great?
I'm happy the second Horcrux is destroyed and I loved the part with Harry looking at Severus and imagining all the girls going after him. LOL! Update soon, I want to see about Sirius and Remus. Author's Response: Yeah and I'd be one of those girls, LOL! Severus can be very clever and yes, Harry can be taught you know. I will try, don;t worry!
Author's Response: yeah and it would work too, maybe! Thanks for reading I need to catch up on my reading!
Are you ever planning on updating that one? I loved Severus and Harry's interaction in this chapter; forcing Harry to choose his punishment really added depth and thought to what he did. My parents make me do that sometimes - actually, it was our decision that if we drive while we drink it's four months without the car. It'll be a long four months... Harry truly acted like an adult nearing the center of the chapter because he was forced to think about his actions and I enjoyed that more mature side of him you so rarely portray. I would have burst out laughing at the girls tripping over their feet for Severus if I wasn't in school. (I'm on spare, no big deal) I was just about ready to shout, Oh me, pick me, ME! ::shakes:: I greatly enjoyed Harry's punishment and I think it holds more merit because he decided his own punishment. I know that the crime weighs more heavily on the mind if you decide your own punishment and you did that beautifully. Severus is still an intimidating man but you can tell that he deeply loves Harry and I'm happy that the boy realizes that. I hope you continue to update and to write your stories. You know that I will continue to read them. Jewels. Author's Response: I'm working on the third chapter of PM, but was having trouble deciding where to put an event, before or after the students from other schools arrive for the tournament. But I've finally figured it out. I'll put the event before since the other schools don't arrive till the end of October early November and there has to be SOMETHING happening between that time so . . .now that's settled, I can finish the chapter. Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about it! Yeah, it's a good idea to make kids do that sometimes and harry had matured more than he did in the books here because of his relationship with Severus and learning what he did about Sev's past in the first book. Now that doesn't mean he'll act like that ALL the time, but he'll come pretty close and he really stop and think, most times, before he does something. Sev does indeed love Harry, though he hasn't come right out and said it, he shows it, enough so even Hedwig sees it. And here in this fic as in PM Harry is very intuitive and knows that Severus loves him and only wants what's best for him. You going to update Moon Called soon?
Author's Response: And you'd be right. Lessons always stick better when you punish yourself. As for Hedwig . . .she's a riot!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad you like it!
Oh, and I thought that having Harry think up his own punishment was a great idea. Imagine Severus allowing Harry that control though. He's come a long way to relinquish that control and take a chance of teaching Harry a valuable lesson. Author's Response: Wow, you know, you're right. I never looked closely at it that way before and now I can see the goshawk really does fit him. Yes, Severus is slowly truating Harry to take responsibility for himself, which is a good thing, because Harry needs someone to trust him that way. And it paid off as you can see. |
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