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Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Ashmeadowphoenix (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hmm...I'm not sure. Maybe an essay for the disobediance but the core of this issue seems to be claustrophobia. I hope Severus has techniques to help Harry deal with that, since this adventure will probably will probably make them both confront all their fears.

    And Hedwig can't be too mad, since she told him it wasn't that bad, hehehe
    Great chapter!!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, it will and he'll help him as much as he can, but it'll be hard to deal with that out in the open. 

    Thanks for the idea and Hedwig might be mad, since she didn;t expect Harry to act on her words. 

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 8:27 pm
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I think Sev needs to punish harry, but how? harry acted like an irresponsible child, so treat him as such, whatever you decide to write, harry needs to learn to listen and be careful of himself.

    Author's Response: He does and he will have learned better by the end of this book and the chapter . . .hopefully!
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 7:48 pm
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh-oh spaghetti o's! lol. Harry, you know better then to disobey Sev, now you'll have to face the music.

    Hmmm, ideas for punishment? I'd say go through with Sev's earlier threat! Make the poor sap sit in a corner and write an essay. AND… not allow Harry out of his sight for a few days, the horror!

    *avoids looking Harry in the eye* What? A girl can't be creatively devious every once in a while?

    Author's Response:

    Yeah now that WOULD be horrible!  Thanks for the ideas!

    harry isn't going to be very happy with either of us, I'm afraid!

    I'll be posting the next chappie soon so look for it.  And don;t forget to check out the awesome banner for this one!

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 5:55 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    If I was Sev I think I'd be tempted to cast a bindus and silencio on Harry and stuff him headfirst into his sleeping bag. Actually, once Hedwig finds out what Harry did, he might be in more trouble with her than with Sev. In either case he's going to be one sorry animagus.

    This is just as great as Broken Wings and I'm so glad that you are writing this sequel. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the one after that and the one after and... well, you get the idea.

    Bravo!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    ha, that's pretty funny!

    That's true, Hedwig will have plenty to say once she finds out. 

    Harry's going to regret this ine way or another.

    I'm so glad you're enjoying this as much as the previous one.  I posted this on ff.net and got a review from someone who said they didn;t think this one was as good as the other one because Severus was scolding and punishing Harry too much and it was becoming predictable.

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 4:48 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    punishments for harry, i can be fairly creative

    1 scrub the whole house from top to bottom with a bucket of water and a tooth brush

    2 not talk to anyone for three hours

    3 make harry write assignments about every potion he has ever made, use the textbooks harry found in the attic

    4 reviewer runs away very fast from harry

    can't review anymore as harry is trying to kill reviewer

    Author's Response:

    Wow those are some punishments.

     

    Run away really fast, because I don't think Harry is in a forgiving mood.

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 4:44 pm
Reviewer: cammy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Busted !!! Poor Harry - he'll wish he stayed inside after Sev is through with him... Please update soon - I am sooo addicted to your writing and it always makes my day when you've posted a new chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! You're awesome for saying so!
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 3:03 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *snickers quietly* Have Harry catch a cold? Naw, just pulling your leg. Good chapter, by the way. Don't have Sev hurt him too much.

    Author's Response: Okay, he won't.  And Harry could catch a cold by flying in the rain.
Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 2:54 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooooo big trouble. Big, big trouble. Any chance Snape brought those jesses that Harry hates so much? If he can't be trusted to stay still for very long...

    Author's Response:

    oo now that's a wicked punishment.

    But I think Sev left the jesses at home.

    Still he could always conjure up a set . .. thanks!

Title: Stormy Weather 02 Jun 2009 2:45 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Once again, the Potter recklessness wins out!

    Harry, Harry what WERE you thinking? Or NOT thinking, rather.

    Now look what trouble you've gotten into.

    Severus and he need to have a long discussion about this and maybe Sev should ground him once the quest is done.

    Author's Response: Good ideas and yes, that Potter gene sure is strong!
Title: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 02 Jun 2009 2:41 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well mouldywarts is getting very creative in shielding his thingymajigs, i can't say the word incase the dark lord is watching and blows up my computer.

    i hope sev can solve the book before harry goes completely insane

    Author's Response: Yes that's for sure.  Gotta watch him, he's a wicked thing and always looking for ways to destroy Harry's supporters. I'll tell Sev to charm your computer so he can't blow it up. :) He put one on mine after the first story in this series. 

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