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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
And I also liked how Severus smacked Harry's hand during the Horcrux retrieval, that was so typically Snape! Great work please update soon! Author's Response: I quite agree! yeah, Severus figured he needed a sharp reminder to look before he leaped. Thanks, i should have the next one up in a few days.
Author's Response: Thanks! One never knows with the Dursleys but you'll see a bit more of them in the future.
-P.G. Author's Response: Thanks I wasn't sure since the town I grew up in was rather large.
-P.G. Author's Response: It was meant to be easy, because they already knew where it was and the ghosts helped. They will become progressively harder and more dangerous. And Harry will learn to his sorrow just how dangerous it will be. Thanks for reviewing!
Just a "little" thing : for me, 7000 is more a small town or a very big village, isn't it? i grew up in a village of about 2000 inhabitants and it was a bit big (and we certainly didn't know everyone lol) Thanks for the chapter ^_^ Author's Response: Good, i wasn;t sure at first what I was going to do to them and my sister helped me out. Hmm . . .I live in the US so that's a considered small for us, but if it's big, I might just change it to maybe 1500? Does that sound right? Thanks for letting me know!
Author's Response: Yes, that was the "easy" one. The others won't be, trust me. Thanks for reviewing!
Great chapter! V. Author's Response: Yes, he did, although it doesn't excuse his actions. I figured they'd still be around, after all murder is one way to ensure a restless spirit coming back. Glad you liked it and hope you like the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
That was really creepy with the ghosts and the Horcruxes. I'm also glad that Dumbledore was able to see what Harry's been through. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and see what dangers our boys are going to experience. Author's Response: I felt that it was necessary for them to learn just what they put Harry through. It was meant to be creepy, the Riddle ghosts would creep anybody out. Dumbles needed to see that and the next chapter will have even more danger and puzzles to solve too.
Dancingkatz Author's Response: Yes, she does and that's a great comparison. She's the balance to those two. And guess what? You can stop anticipating and start reading since I've updated. I did that right after you left a review, LOL! |
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