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Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 3:46 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, the Dursleys finally got what was coming to them! I'm so glad! Couldn;t happen to nicer folks!

    And I also liked how Severus smacked Harry's hand during the Horcrux retrieval, that was so typically Snape! Great work please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    I quite agree!

    yeah, Severus figured he needed a sharp reminder to look before he leaped.

    Thanks, i should have the next one up in a few days.

Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 3:00 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Great! I loved the ghosts, they were really neat and I liked how they helped Severus and Harry find the Horcrux. Dumbledore, for once, did the right thing and nailed the Dursleys good! Hopefully they will learn something!

    Author's Response: Thanks! One never knows with the Dursleys but you'll see a bit more of them in the future.
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 2:28 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, I was just reading your reviews and I wanted to give a little input on the village size topic. I grew up in a town that was about population 400 and that would be more of an environment where everyone does know everyone else. I think anything above 500 is pushing it a bit. And despite the town's size, there can still be landmarks: we have a park, post office, church, elementary school, gas station, and antique shop. It's small, but there's still 'stuff' and even traffic lights on the main drag. I hope that helps!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: Thanks I wasn't sure since the town I grew up in was rather large. 
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 2:23 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, Dumbledore becomes a Slytherin. Nice. That part was my favorite. I think the first mansion's challenge was almost too easy and look forward to the challenges of the next! Hopefully Harry won't forget how dangerous the mission really is!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: It was meant to be easy, because they already knew where it was and the ghosts helped.  They will become progressively harder and more dangerous.  And Harry will learn to his sorrow just how dangerous it will be.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 2:34 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very good. I like the sentence on the Dursleys lol and especially the Honey Tongue charm ^_^

    Just a "little" thing : for me, 7000 is more a small town or a very big village, isn't it? i grew up in a village of about 2000 inhabitants and it was a bit big (and we certainly didn't know everyone lol)

    Thanks for the chapter ^_^

    Author's Response:

    Good, i wasn;t sure at first what I was going to do to them and my sister helped me out. 

    Hmm . . .I live in the US so that's a considered small for us, but if it's big, I might just change it to maybe 1500?  Does that sound right?

    Thanks for letting me know!

Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009 12:11 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Poltergeists! *squeee* Well, the first horcrux went surprisingly swiftly. Now I am curious about the Gaunt manor... Mila

    Author's Response: Yes, that was the "easy" one.  The others won't be, trust me.  Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 25 May 2009 11:06 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Ghosts? Hmm, interesting twist--especially with those attitudes (Now we know where old tommy boy gets it from--he came by it "honestly" as the saying goes--elder tom is just as nasty, in his own muggle way.)

    Great chapter!
    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, he did, although it doesn't excuse his actions.  I figured they'd still be around, after all murder is one way to ensure a restless spirit coming back.  Glad you liked it and hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 25 May 2009 10:13 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool!

    Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Restless Spirits and Retribution 25 May 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like that the Dursleys are going to have to experience what Harry had to endure at their cruel hands.

    That was really creepy with the ghosts and the Horcruxes. I'm also glad that Dumbledore was able to see what Harry's been through.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and see what dangers our boys are going to experience.

    Author's Response:

    I felt that it was necessary for them to learn just what they put Harry through.

    It was meant to be creepy, the Riddle ghosts would creep anybody out.

    Dumbles needed to see that and the next chapter will have even more danger and puzzles to solve too.

Title: Foreboding 25 May 2009 8:55 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Hurrah! I'm so glad you have rhe sequel started so soon! This is wonderful. I love Hedwig's "Try not to kill each other while I'm gone." She mothers both Sev and Harry and reminds me a bit of a feathered Mrs. Weasley. I'm looking forward to the next chapter with much anticipation.

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    Yes, she does and that's a great comparison.  She's the balance to those two.  And guess what?

    You can stop anticipating and start reading since I've updated.

    I did that right after you left a review, LOL!


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