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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Title: Foreboding 22 May 2009 5:39 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    YAY! You updated--I'm so happy! Lol, I like how grouchy Sev was when Harry woke him up! That's just what I would have expected from him. Man, it looks like they're going to be sleeping on the ground for a long time. I like how you've added magical elements to their camping trip and am very excited to see what happens at Riddle Manor!

    Great start!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: They are, especially when they have to figure out where the other Horcruxes are.  Severus can be a grouchy curmudgeon all right.  I'm glad you liked the magic parts I figured why not use magic if you've got it to make life easier.  I certainly would! Riddle Manor has now been posted.
Title: Foreboding 22 May 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: Pellegrina (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Cool, I get to be the first to review your sequel! A very promising start! I can imagine how Harry felt after the nightmare/vision! Forests and the utdoors itself can be quite scary even without a madman haunting you. Everyrhing tends to develope strange shadows and every sound feels like someone coming. It's kind of a nice scare when you are just outside camping for fun, but for Harry in his situation it must have been quite a struggle to fall asleep again!
    I'm looking forward to your version of the Horcrux-hunt - I enjoyed the first part greatly! Thank you for sharing!

    Author's Response:

    It can as I've been on many a camping trip when i was a child and half the fun was scaring yourself silly with what might be out there.

    Yes, harry;s situation is different and he did have a problem falling asleep again.  Not just becaus eof the nightmares but because he was embarrassed too.

    You're welocme and the next part's up now!

Title: Foreboding 22 May 2009 5:14 pm
Reviewer: dawna (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You rock. Not one, but two great stories being written simultaneously. Thank you. I cannot wait to find out what happens to the Dursleys.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! *blushes*

    the next chapter's up so see what Dumbledore does to them.


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