| Title: Chapter 25 – Good- Night Talks
| 15 Apr 2010 9:25 am
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| Reviewer: FaeChild (Signed)
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Didnt get the update for this if its on ff.net buts its fine. :) Great chapter, love it, love it, love it. Keep it up :) ~FaeChild aka silvermoonfae
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
My gut still tells me that there is a strong possibility that one or both of the boys will panic. They are both scared of dark, closed in places (note that I didn't say small) and it might be a good idea to work on that fear first.
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| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 02 Apr 2010 3:34 pm
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| Reviewer: lenka (Anonymous)
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up-date up-date up-date :) come ooooon... ok, I know you are probably bussy with the other stories (and some other minor matters - like life and such ;)) but still...this wonderful story hasnt been updated in almost a month... so...you aint abandoning it, right? just feeling a need to make sure... :)
Author's Response: I have many more chapters written. This story seems to be hexed because even after my beta exchange I still have problems. My new beta has no time to edit as well. I hope this problem will be solved soon but I can't change anything.
| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 14 Mar 2010 8:35 pm
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| Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
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OK, now I've caught back up with you.
:-)
I really like how this story is developing. I'm pretty sure I've said that before, but it's still true!!
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| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 14 Mar 2010 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Nice! I have read three capters together today and liked them all. Mila
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| Title: Chapter 23 - Someone else in Trouble
| 07 Mar 2010 9:35 pm
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| Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous)
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This was a tense chapter. I wasn't sure if Black Hawk would stay and I was worried that he would leave. I'm glad that he stayed, in the end and that he took the time to assure Harry he would be staying. Excellent work! I am excited for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Yay!!!! Black Hawk is staying.
Did I mention that I love this story?
I can't wait for the next chapter and some more Harry and Severus time. And even some time between Severus and Black Hawk.
I loved Severus's nervousness at the table it was perfect. I also liked how Harry ran after Black Hawk.
Please update soon! (And don't forget about the sneak peak! :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I'm glad that White Cloud and Light Arrow helped Black Hawk to see that he is right where he belongs. I find it sad in a funny sort of way that he never realized that he was counseling the children. Sometimes, just being a shoulder to cry on is enough to help someone through their difficult times. I'm really happy that Black Hawk decided to stay.
Great chapter!
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| Title: Chapter 22 – A new friend already lost?
| 02 Mar 2010 1:24 am
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| Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous)
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I really like how Black Hawk and Severus spoke freely in front of Harry, enabling him to see that even adults feel vulnerable and don't always have all of the answers. I too, like Harry, hope that he does not lose Black Hawk, though I can understand his possible need to figure out where he belongs. A very engaging chapter. I am really looking forward to the next.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I do hope that Black Hawk will wait to make his decision, because right now, Harry needs him. Of course, he won't know this unless Harry verbalizes it and asks him to stay.
It was good of them to talk about their issues in front of Harry. It allowed him to see that it is okay to have a hard time and to need help. Everyone needs a helping hand at times and there's nothing wrong with it.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: You will find out much more about Black Hawk in the next chapter. There you also will see if he leaves. Thank you very much for your review!
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