This story is wonderful. There are so many emotions expressed: sorrow, happiness, depression, love. You managed to express the hurt that the boys felt while also expressing the healing that they seem to be slowly experiencing. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
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| Title: Chapter 20 – Learning
| 17 Feb 2010 12:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Phew! I'm so glad that Harry is going to go back to the camp. Black Hawk and Light Arrow are so good with him.
I hope now that Harry doesn't have anymore thoughts of revenge and killing. I really don't want him to end up in Azkaban! Where would Severus and Draco be then.
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I hope that Harry will make the decision to allow himself to heal. It will be hard to face all that he endured, but the end result will be well worth the pain.
Great chapter!
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Lemme guess, the Messenger is from An Aunt's Love? I love that story. I am enjoying this one so far. Keep up the good work.
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I really do like Black Hawk. He is a good guy. Now, just to get Harry ABLE to go back without completely falling into some sort of panic attack/break down.
Great chapter.
V.
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| Title: Chapter 19 – Getting Company
| 11 Feb 2010 12:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Carra (Anonymous)
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Thx for the update. Lovely!!!
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I think I'm really starting to like Black Hawk--Short of Sev, He's seems to know what Harry needs at the moment--maybe even better than Sev who would go all parental on him. . .
Great chatper.
V.
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| Title: Chapter 19 – Getting Company
| 11 Feb 2010 3:59 am
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| Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous)
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This seems like a big adventure. I like that Black Hawk did not force Harry to return to the camp and that he gave him options, but not too many. It is good to have options. I look forward to the next chapter. :)
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I hope that Black Hawk will be able to get through to Harry that going back to the camp is the best thing. Harry is incredibly stubborn and it will take a lot for him to be able to give enough to allow others to help him. I believe that this experience will help Harry to begin to truly trust at least one of the residents of the camp.
The time away will hopefully allow Harry to find a way to take his focus off of Draco and to start his own healing process. I know that the boys bonded very deeply to each other, which helped them to cope, but they were also allowed to become far too codependent upon each other. I just wish that the separation hadn't happened in such a traumatic way.
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wow! i loved this chapter! 2 chapters in quick succession! WOO! cant wait for the next one!
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