That was a very good and promisung beginning! I hope to read more soon! Don't abandon the story, please!!!
Oooooooooooh VERY interesting! Please update!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 07 Aug 2009 11:29 pm
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| Reviewer: anon (Anonymous)
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wow, this was a great chap... when is 2 gonna be ready?
Good chapter..and great story so far. Keep it. up
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Jun 2009 4:04 pm
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| Reviewer: MissD (Anonymous)
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Wow, I like this...great idea, so different from all the rest out there. I like Snape as a vampire and am looking forward to seeing what happens between him and Dumbledore and also him meeting the Dursleys.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Jun 2009 7:53 am
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| Reviewer: Darth Polemic (Anonymous)
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Wow, a very interesting start to a story. I don't know music boxes could be used like pensieves since you're the first one who have used that idea. Very cool original idea! The part where Harry exclaimed in surprise when he saw his birth certificate made me laugh out loud. ROFL. Dumbledore obliviating everyone who was involved was quite sad but I can imagine him doing it since he IS a meddling old man:p Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what Snape will do to Dumbledore for ruining all their lives.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 17 Jun 2009 2:10 am
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, grabbed my attention. So will Sev be doing a pay back to the Dursley's?
Wow! What a creative idea... but man do I despise Dumbledore in this story >_< He sounds absolutely mad, completely obsessed with this prophesy. Definitely a different Dumbledore then what I'm used to, but an interesting twist.
Sev’s one pissed vampire right now, wonder what he’ll do? *eager*
Oh wow! What's going to happen now.
Interesting start. How are they going to get past Dumbledore if Severus claims Harry as his own though?
Please update soon. I'm dying to know!
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