Definitely a promising start, I look forward to seeing how this will play out, thanks for writing!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Aug 2010 5:43 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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wow Interesting I look forward to more.
Intriguing start! I'll look forward to seeing how the story develops!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 24 Jan 2010 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Amanda (Anonymous)
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How interesting! Please update soon!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Nov 2009 6:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous)
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This is an interesting start...
Hrm. This is interesting. There are a few grammar issues, but they're minor. If I have your premise right, it sounds like it could be intriguing. Keep it up! :)
-K
chews on nails, cant wait for next chapter.
very interesting beginning
Author's Response: Thanks for reading the first chapter! I hope the next chapter will be interesting too. :)
Oh, very very nice. I can't wait to read more. Welcome to Potions and Snitches lilette. I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
This is quite original and I'm looking forward to seeing Snape and Harry interaction.
Author's Response: Thank you for the warm welcome! Hopefully I can finish proof reading this second chapter soon! Thanks so much for reading the first chapter!
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