I just wanted to say, this story is extremely clever and original. It's obvious you work very hard in crafting it, and that hard work shows. It's original, adventurous, and keeps me on edge.
The end bit with the Horcrux, Lockhart, and the coat had me laughing. That was hilarious.
Until next time. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I've enjoyed writing it. I like to throw a little humor in as long as it doesn't interfere with the plot.
Lucius' hearing was a bit different than I expected... and I laughed when I realized that they'd set Lucius up as bait to catch the Aurors who were secretly Deatheaters.
I was wondering when Marge was going to try something like this. Poor Dudley! I can't wait to see how the rescue is mounted. A flying Ford Anglia? Or perhaps a dragon? Hee!
Another excellent chapter! I love getting the chapter alerts for this story.
Well done!
I think Marge needs a little more supervision... the kind that comes with men in white jackets! Poor Dudley. I'm sure a rescue is in his future though. Great job. Looking forward to more.
| Title: The Battle of Spinners End
| 08 Feb 2011 7:27 pm
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| Reviewer: A.M. (Anonymous)
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Please, keep continuing with this fic. It`s been a real fun to read.
| Title: Mad-eye and the Fox
| 08 Feb 2011 4:53 pm
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| Reviewer: A.M. (Anonymous)
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The last two lines are the bst. The look on Lucius` face, I can imagine it to be priceless! >:D
:-)
that was fun!
Thanks for sharing
V.
| Title: The Pub
| 07 Jan 2011 1:36 pm
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| Reviewer: elle (Anonymous)
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that was really cute at the end with Lucius and Petunia!
fantastic! i can't wait for more
How wonderful that dear "dignified" Lucius did something so spontaneous as proposing when he was hung over! :-)
Loved the chapter!
V.
Fun chapter, loved Lucius and Arthur in the pub. The proposal was great.
Neville needs psychiatric help, seriously....
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