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Title: Tryouts 15 Jul 2010 8:00 am
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) [Report This]
    :D
    Wonderful^^ The mental picture of Minerva sitting for houres on on Albus desk with The Philosoper's Stone, wand at ready was incredibly amusing. So was the image of Albus sitting on his bed in the last chamber behind all the nasty little traps to guard the stone... All alone but perfectly able to catch up on sleep^^
    And I somehow like Heather. :)
    Great chapter^^

    Greetings, Baltaine

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for the review, I enjoyed the idea of Minerva being quite anxious at having the fabled Sorcerers Stone in her keeping.

     

Title: Tryouts 14 Jul 2010 5:59 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    continues to be good. you are "fleshing" out some of the Slytherines..good job!
Title: Prison Visit 14 Jul 2010 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great dynamic between Draco, Dudley, Harry and Hermione, I thought their conversation was really well written. I loved how Lucius is covertly picking up dating hints from Severus and feel truly sorry for him. I hope Petunia will be able to give him confidence in other people again.
Title: Memories of the Cave 14 Jul 2010 1:52 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting Tom/Voldemort interaction and I loved the dynamic between Dudley, Dean, Seamus and Ron (who I expect will be getting better grades than the canon!) I found Amy's story heartbreaking
Title: Remembering Billy 14 Jul 2010 1:50 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    A very interesting and emotive chapter, I loved the Harry and Severus interaction at the end
Title: First Day First Year 14 Jul 2010 1:49 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm enjoying your portrayal of Dumbledore- and his machinations- and the scene in which Tom persuaded the prefects to help the first years get to class was funny and very well written. Poor old Gryffindorks didn't know what hit them ^^
Title: Dorm Doings 14 Jul 2010 1:45 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying your evolution of Tom's character and the part written from Voldemort's pov was really interesting; you portrayed his mindset vividly and believably
Title: Sorting Hat Madness 14 Jul 2010 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved your choices for the sorting; I thought they were all very appropriate, especially Tom and Neville.
Title: Tryouts 14 Jul 2010 1:41 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    cool! I like how you are showing the doubts and musings of Voldemort, which is completely missing in the canon. Dumbledore's character though is not coming through convincingly. Maybe because it is from a somewhat different angle than the canon..

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I imagine Voldemort has alot of doubts and fears - or he would have been contend with one or two Horcruxes - (three is a powerful number as well). Uncertainty makes people like him angry and unstable.

    Dumbledore even in scenes where he was supposed to look vulnerable or human, still managed to seem omniscient. I have to think that he really had to be a little uncertain and torn - having to send Harry to his death. HEre he gets to know Harry even more than in canon, and has to be even more unsure (I would think).

     Thanks for the review.

Title: Tryouts 14 Jul 2010 1:40 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh... Do I sense a rival for poor Dora?

    A wonderfully written chapter, as always. I really enjoyed the part written from Voldemorts pov.

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