Poor Harry. He is in for a rough time. And now Albus isn't well since he put on the cursed ring. I am looking forward to finding out how Albus is going to destroy the horcrux while shielding Harry's soul.
Uh oh. Something wicked this way comes. I was wondering why Severus didn't help Harry escape from the Voldemort. Now I know.
I thought it was funny that Snape didn't seem to know that they weren't actually in their bodies. Lailie's conversation with Severus about his feeling for Harry was good. She is and interesting character and seems like a really good healer.
Whew! I wasn't sure that Severus would make it through in time. I wondered if the dark pulsing area was the horcrux. Having it grab Severus by his marked arm was a nice touch.
The idea that they are going into Harry's mind to find him is fascinating. I'm looking forward to seeing what they find and how they recognize Harry.
| Title: O Coward Conscience, How Dost Thou Afflict Me!
| 26 May 2012 8:10 pm
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| Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I wondered when the horcrux issue would come up. Having a healer will be interesting. It sounds like she and Albus have been coming up with ideas to deal with the problem.
Wow. This must have been a shock for the Weasleys and Harry's other friends. The fight scene was good. Who would have thought that Harry would be stopped by Snape with a frying pan?
| Title: But There's More In Me Than Thou Understand'st
| 26 May 2012 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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It's a good thing Harry is going back to Hogwarts where they can keep a closer eye on him. He really needs help.
It doesn't sound like Albus is going to warn Remus or the Weasleys of his concerns. That can't be good. At least Harry seems to be trying to fight it. Good second chapter for building the suspense.
Hmm. Is Harry OK or not? I'm looking forward to finding out. It is an interesting beginning.
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