Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 03 Mar 2011 12:16 pm
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Reviewer: Espied7 (Anonymous)
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Good start, but it needs to go somewhere! If you have more to the story, I'd love to hear it.
Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 15 Dec 2010 12:54 pm
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Reviewer: Evanlyn (Signed)
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I like your writing style but I think it's quite odd that a potion master can't cook :)
Awesome Story!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! Can't Wait To Read More!!!
Awesome Story!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! Can't Wait To Read More!!!
I'm amused. I generally prefer the canon version of Severus who grew up in the muggle world, but a purely wizarding one works for this - although if you redid it so it was purely from Harry's point of view, then you could still have Harry *think* Severus didn't know anything about cooking. You could have him make some of the "circular cauldron" and "can;t house elves do this easier?" comments out loud.
Either way, it's still funny. :D
Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 30 Jul 2010 12:49 pm
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Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous)
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Interesting...so why'd you stop?
I think this is pretty good, as a start to a story or a one-shot, although I'd like to see more. Made me laugh.
Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 29 Apr 2010 12:12 am
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Reviewer: Princess613 (Anonymous)
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I want you to continue on basic principles. You put Snape and cooking together.
Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 23 Apr 2010 12:13 am
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Reviewer: Mischivious Fox (Anonymous)
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its a good start but I have one suggestion don't tell people that they wont get anymore of the story just because the don't review you should enjoy writing the story and not depend on others reviewing it to add more in reality it only turns people away I personally would like to read more but that's up to you
Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 21 Sep 2009 6:38 pm
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Reviewer: Jada Ryl (Anonymous)
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Ha ha! This is absolutely hilarious! I love the idea of Harry trying to act Snapish while teaching Snape how to cook. I'll look forward to a continuation of this. :-)
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