| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 04 Sep 2019 1:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a very amusing story
| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 30 Dec 2013 5:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Genuka (Signed)
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*snort* A little bit of the man's own medicine.
| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 23 Sep 2013 10:34 am
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| Reviewer: Severus Lowri Snape (Anonymous)
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I like it, it's interesting. Please continue. It doesn't really work as a one-shot, it needs to be more chapters mainly to explain things a bit more, like why Snape is there. Why does Harry have to teach him to cook? Will Snape be able to cook at the end... That sort of thing. I've given you a rating of 7, mainly because it is short and I believe you should continue with it.
| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 14 Nov 2012 10:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Kali Wilson (Anonymous)
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This story was really great and i think that you should continue. The idea is very interesting
This could either stay as a one-shot (as it has for the past couple of years) or become something much bigger--why does Snape need to learn to cook like a Muggle? Why is he really there (aside from the obvious learning more about HP and how to get along with him)? How is he going to react to HP sleeping in the cupboard? Why does he need to hide (which may be obvious, I know, but how was he unmasked?)? ETC.
Oh this is good, please update soon. Also can you try to put Snape in more character-I know he is at odds with the situation, but he is certainly no push-over....
| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 18 May 2011 12:33 pm
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| Reviewer: CCAP (Anonymous)
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| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 18 May 2011 12:32 pm
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| Reviewer: CCAP (Anonymous)
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| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 17 May 2011 12:00 am
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| Reviewer: Lumcer (Anonymous)
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The story is cute I kind of wish there was more...
KCK-Lumcer
| Title: That's a Scary Thought
| 27 Apr 2011 4:31 pm
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| Reviewer: Bazilda (Anonymous)
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HI, the story look really interesting, it is a shame that there are no more chapters. Do you plan on continuing? I like this part pretty much and I would love to read whole story. Good work.
p.s.sorry for my gramatic english is not my mother language
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