Oh wow! I loved it. I love this Snape. He's so cool!!!! SO, how IS Harry still alive? Why IS Snape so nice? Who DID eat your slice of cheesecake?? I want to know the answers to all these questions!!!! PLEASE TELL ME!!!!
Cheesecake? Strawberry cheesecake you say? Yummy. My favourite desert! I want some please.
Ooh, now Harry survived the killing curse, yet again! But how? Interesting, very interesting!
You left us on a cliffie, sort of! I want more....please? Great chappie.
I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO TELL ME!!!!!!!!!!This is very well written. I'm enjoying reading this. YOu had a few errors here and there but they didn't affect the story for me.
Author's Response: I'm very sorry about the errors but I'm not a native speaker and I don't have a beta, yet. I'll try to remedy that soon. Thank you soo much for your kind words and also for taking the time to review!!!!!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 26 Aug 2009 4:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous)
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Loved this - this story is really shaping up nicely - can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!!
Whooops! Wrong box... That "review" from minute ago was supposed to be my notes on this fic. A little sleepy still here. :)
Anyway, a real review this time. I find this fic really intriguing and can't wait for some actual reasons and explanations. Really interesting though that Harry no longer has his scar...
Author's Response: LOL... thank you so much for taking the time to leave me a review!!! I really appreciate the kind words!!!!
Harry wakes up in a strange place where the only other person is Snape.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 24 Aug 2009 11:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Jenna (Anonymous)
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My goodness you are one for the cliffhangers. This is turning into a wonderful story. I really like your writing. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Author's Response: Thank you sooooo much for your kind words. *hands over plater full of cookies* I'll try to reduce the cliffies. Thanks for taking the time to review!!!!
Please hurry with the update. I wonder why Harry's scar is gone. Keep up the good work and please hurry with that update. Sorry for sounding impatient but this cliffee is driving me crazy. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review!!! Sorry about the cliffies. They are a bad habbit but I will try to reduce them to a minimum:-)
I think that I'm as anxious to find out about what happened to Harry, as Harry is!
Can't wait to read more. I like that Snape himself was shocked that he called Harry by his first name.
Nice chappie.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I was also shocked to write Snape say Harry's name....
Woot!! I like. I really like the contrast between Snape's words and his actions - like he threatens Harry about taking too long in the bathroom, but then is actually gentle with him when he comes to find him. It seems realistic to me. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I relly try to keep Harry and Severus' behaviour relastic and not too out of character. Thanks for the review:-))
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