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Title: Chapter 7 - Diagon Alley (20) 08 Aug 2010 2:31 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Yep. I'd say they probably failed. ^^ Oh, well, Sev's got a pet out of it, at least. :D

    Author's Response: :)
Title: Chapter 6 - Dinner Time (19) 08 Aug 2010 1:55 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Fluffy or not, this story keeps getting more amusing and entertaining, with just the right amount of seriousness added in.

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot! It's good to hear things like that!
Title: Chapter 5 – After dinner (18) 08 Aug 2010 1:46 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww...! ^^

    Delightful chapter - love how Fred and George deliberately misunderstood Molly's words. :D

    Poor Harry, though... Poor kid definitely got handed the short of the stick, didn't he? I hope he can rise out of his depression, soon. It's certainly not a nice place to be.

    Author's Response: Yes, Fred and George love to misunderstand things. :)
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 08 Aug 2010 1:30 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm... Hmm... Well. That's got my attention.

    I wonder what happens next?

    Author's Response: :D
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 08 Aug 2010 1:09 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    You portray little Severus with all his uncertainties and way of seeing the world very well.

    Great chapter. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 07 Aug 2010 11:55 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I can almost hear little Sev's laughter! He's really adorable. I like the way you portrayed Madam Hooch, also. Well done!

    Author's Response: Yes, Madam Hooch is a cool character to change a bit. :)
Title: Chapter 1 – The Beginning (1-6) 07 Aug 2010 11:05 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw... poor little Sev!

    A good start, grugster - I'm liking it so far. ^^

    Author's Response: I'm glad you do!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 18 Apr 2010 1:10 pm
Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story.
    I love little Severus though it is sad that he only had the chice between Azkaban and being de-aged... Well - he deserved a second chance at life. Mayby this one will be happy and really great. :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 05 Mar 2010 10:03 am
Reviewer: Winky (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful story! I haven't cried so much in awhile (happy and sad tears).

    Author's Response:

    Two sequels are already up for this story.

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 11 Nov 2009 8:05 pm
Reviewer: icecream_effn_sundae (Signed) [Report This]
    You should definately upload the sequel :)
    I really enjoyed reading this very much and am curious as to how it continues.

    Author's Response:

    The first sequel is already up. It's called "Happy Birthday, Alastor".

      Thank you very much for your review!


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