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Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 13 Oct 2009 11:55 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,

    This is a really cute story. I liked how each of the character is in this story. The only character I find a bit hard to believe is Hermione (that she doesn't love Ron, is trying to be a mediwitch and that she doesn't understand Harry's moods).

    All the other parts are really fantastic and I hope you will upload the sequel!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 04 Oct 2009 2:05 pm
Reviewer: kittiejverdena (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a great story! I look forward to seeing the sequel.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 29 Sep 2009 3:13 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so happy for Sev, but Harry needs to be happy. Yes, please post sequel, and take care of yourself.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 28 Sep 2009 10:07 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    This was such a charming de-aging story! I am glad that at the end things look hopeful for Harry as well as Sev. The only ones who are looking forward to a rough time are the elderly Mom and Dad!!!

    Please do upload the sequel to this story - more of Little Sev, please!!!

    Author's Response:

    I will upload the sequel in the next days.

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 14 - Telling the Truth (27) 28 Sep 2009 9:52 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad that Harry is letting Poppy take care of him. She will not be as smothering as Molly and Hermione I am sure. You are really focusing on the aftermath in this story, but now I am curious about how the defeat of Voldemort was done in your universe. Maybe someday you will share that with us!

    Loved the chapter!

    Author's Response: I have no plans for it but maybe I will add it in the second sequel!
Title: Chapter 13 – Harry's Problems (26) 28 Sep 2009 9:46 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    OK - now there is a clearer picture of Harry's issues. Never ending pain in a leg and what appears to be a case of depression. I sure hope wizards know how to deal with depressions - but with stories about Boris the Balmy (the wizard who tried to teach goblins ballet, I think he was!) you have to wonder how much they pay attention to mental issues!!!

    I love how Sev wants to get his friend Harry all fixed up!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 12 - Visiting Ro (25) 28 Sep 2009 8:37 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Yayy Harry - getting greased up so Little Sev wouldn't pout about it! I love these cute sweet moments!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
Title: Chapter 11 - The Photosession (24) 28 Sep 2009 8:30 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I love reading about Pookah chasing the garden gnomes, and how much fun Little Sev is having with him. How nice (and lucky?!) that Pookah is such a social creature and does not look like he will be taking chunks out of Sev's friends and family!

    I hope with Hermione here we hear more about Harry, and they can get their former warm relationship back again.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 28 Sep 2009 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful! It was very well written. Hope all goes well with the hospital visit.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 10 - Big Friend (23) 28 Sep 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    I like Charlie - he is trying so hard for Harry and Sev. It really is a good thing he has all those younger brothers and sister so he can remember how to handle the little one AND the big one!

    Author's Response: *nod*

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