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Title: Chapter 5 – After dinner (18) 07 Sep 2009 3:16 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    :) I started this story yesterday and I really like it! Hopefully Harry will feel better after he hangs around Severus since it seems his enthusiasm really rubs off on everyone around him.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story!
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 06 Sep 2009 8:09 pm
Reviewer: InuChan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am reviewing again so you will post again. :-) Hmm...now I am very curious about Harry. What is wrong? Is he still seeing Ginny in your story?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing again. I'm very happy about every single review I get. There will be no Harry romance in this story (maybe later in one of the sequels). He is too occupied with his health and emotional problems.

     

Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 06 Sep 2009 5:05 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh... I thought it was Ron I had to worry about, but maybe it's Harry. Whatever he's been through, it can't be easy. Does he blame Severus for what has happened to him? I think it's obvious that Severus will want to try and connect with him because he understands Harry's emotions better than anyone else's at the Burrow; he's felt them, himself, even at age four.

    Maybe together, they can straighten each other out. Please update soon--this is really good!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: You will find the answers to all your questions very soon!!! Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 06 Sep 2009 4:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Still enjoying this! I just hope Ron accepts Severus. I'm a bit worried about that, though I imagine Hermione's given him a talking to about it already. This is so adorable--please don't stop writing!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: No, Ron won't be a big problem this time. :) Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 06 Sep 2009 2:35 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice chapters. I like how happy little Sevvy is and I can't wait to see him grow up. I'm a bit worried that he'll have a really hard time when the other students come in, but hopefully Harry will cure that.

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    The students won't come in this story. It will appear in the second sequel. The first sequel will be about Alastor's birthday because it was a birthday present for a friend. So it is a bit confusing but I will explain it when I upload it!

    Thank you for your review! 

Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 06 Sep 2009 12:04 pm
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    yay for finding out more soon. i don't like having harry all emo. it's weird. he was always so resilient in the books. good chap, sunny. please continue.

    Author's Response: Harry will be very moody in this story. Sorry. At least in the sequel he is more balanced but still a bit grumpy sometimes. Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 06 Sep 2009 11:41 am
Reviewer: LuKat (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course this is an AU story (otherwise we would not have Fred!)so the defeat of Voldemort could be different - so why Harry is limping and bitter means his story is probably different as well. There is an intriguing suggestion that Severus was on better terms with the trio at the end than is shown in canon. I am looking forward to hearing that story!

    I like how everyone is trying to reassure little Sev in this new strange place!

    Author's Response: Yes, it is AU. Otherwise we wouldn't even have Severus or Dumbledore... :) There will be hint after hint how the battle and all the stuff before has been. You have to be patient. I'm very glad you like it! Thank you for your review! t!
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 06 Sep 2009 11:39 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is really cute, sunny, as always. you always write such cute stories :P. Little Sev is adorable.

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you like it! Thank you for your review! 
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 06 Sep 2009 9:14 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    * Curious about Harry*

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 – The Beginning (1-6) 06 Sep 2009 8:44 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw! This looks like it will be really good. I love how defensive adult Severus was about the change and how so many people on the Hogwarts staff went out of their way to save him from Azkaban. Very nice work!

    -P.G.

    P.S. I also really enjoyed the toilet monster. I used to think there might be a snake hiding in there as a kid, lol, so I understand!

    Author's Response:

    Around me people told about rats coming through the sanitation into the toilet, and I feared they will come while I was on the toilet as a child. :)

    I also knew some kids who were scared about going to the toilet as well.

    Thank you very much for your review! I hope you will enjoy the rest of the story as well.

     


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