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Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 09 Sep 2024 9:00 am
Reviewer: Marcs Tee (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a good one 👍🏻😍👌🏼
Title: Chapter 15 – The End (28) 22 Sep 2015 5:27 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    I thoroughly enjoyed this.

    --his

    Author's Response: I'm glad you did. :)
Title: Chapter 11 - The Photosession (24) 22 Sep 2015 4:58 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Pookah inspected the camera at the best possible moment. lol!

    --his

    Author's Response: I really loved writing this little scene. :)
Title: Chapter 9- Hagrid’s Hut (22) 22 Sep 2015 4:37 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Taking care of a little sick one on a schedule may help Severus stick to his eating and napping schedule.

    I can just picture Pookah under a 4yr old Severus' shirt! lol. That pic is 'awwwwww' worthy.

    --his

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 7 - Diagon Alley (20) 22 Sep 2015 4:05 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Kids make us feel we have aced our exam and then failed then aced then ... well you get the picture ... gotta love them. One minute they are laughing so hard then the next tears the size golfballs are pouring down their faces then they are happy all over again. Whew! I'm exhausted just remembering raising my two. lol.

    A pet weasel. Adult Severus would find the humor in that somewhere-once he was alone and no one could hear him laugh about it.

    --his

    --his

    Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful words.
Title: Chapter 6 - Dinner Time (19) 22 Sep 2015 3:52 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    'Puppy-dog eyes will get you nowhere young man.' lol.

    --his
Title: Chapter 5 – After dinner (18) 22 Sep 2015 3:42 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Calling Minerva 'mummy' was perfect.

    --his
Title: Chapter 4 - The Burrow (17) 22 Sep 2015 3:30 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    Children can be quite adept at noticing when others are sad or in pain. My daughter is one. She wants everyone to be happy and ok. It makes her sad when others aren't. Even now in her 20s.

    --his
Title: Chapter 3 - New friends (13-16) 22 Sep 2015 3:18 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    I am loving this fic. Naptime with Alaster was great.

    Hermione to the rescue! That was really good.

    --his
Title: Chapter 2 - Adjusting (7-12) 22 Sep 2015 2:38 pm
Reviewer: hisnhers (Signed) [Report This]
    This made me smile, after it brought tears to my eyes. Enjoyed the part where Severus was flying. Well done.

    --his

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