I liked it, but the end felt a little rushed? Good job though!
Love the ending! Also, couldn't help laughing at the Slytherins sighing in relief, while the Gryffindors had the opposite reaction! Too funny! Cool detail about Snape's quarters being behind the tapestry. It made me wonder what sort of design Snape would have in the Potions dungeon-- if you write another story set in the classroom, you might describe Snape's choice/taste in tapestry design! Great first effort-- keep on writing! :-)
Good. You should continue this story though.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate the feedback! Unfortunately I like the way it stands on its own - I think if I continued it I'd probably ruin it :)
'blown to smithereens' haha, i can't imagine snape saying that. so funny
good little fic.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Oh that was wonderful!
So Snape really does care. Too cute.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
Great story! I'd love to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like :)
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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Brilliant story. Are you going to write a sequal I would love to read more
Author's Response: Thank you :) I won't be doing a sequel though, I'm working on some other fics atm.
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