the story is good so far, you write just like JK, I almost believed that this could be cannon. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Ok, Let me tell you something. I have been DIEING for a story like this, where Harry gets hit with the curse. I have never found one. Until now. THANK YOU SO MUCH! I can't wait for more!
update? Please? This is too good to not continue!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 27 Jan 2010 12:32 am
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| Reviewer: Raining Ink (Anonymous)
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*squeal* I haven't run across an idea like this before! Do please continue it! It made my day...until I saw that there were only two chapter... I can't wait to see where you take it. I have a feeling that things are becoming immeasurable complicated for Snape and Harry and...everyone else!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 Jan 2010 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: wolfawaken (Anonymous)
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VERY GOOD! I wil be looking forward for more chapters.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 22 Jan 2010 5:01 pm
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| Reviewer: ceara (Anonymous)
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well done, cant wait for more
Oh I loved that! (in my singlemindedness to focus on my fic I missed a bunch of updates and I'm so glad I re-found this one! ^^)
I absolutely loved that last line - the 'let's not' was very Snapey ^-^
And the discoveries and possibilities and Harry's pov still uncertain from chapter one... I'm really looking forward to an update ^-^ (and really hoping I dont manage to miss it again, I'd love to see where you take this ^^)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 21 Dec 2009 8:58 pm
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| Reviewer: booksug (Anonymous)
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Plese carry on. This is so good. I loved it.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 19 Dec 2009 11:13 pm
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| Reviewer: Paula (Anonymous)
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I really admired your depiction of Snape, all impatient, cruel, brooding...just like I always imagined him to be! You just put the thoughts into words and did that so realistically but also added some references to the past that J.K.Rowling hinted at her books. The scars on Harry's back, well I can imagine where those might come from since I've read so many fics where Harry's been abused, but I'm really looking forward to Snape's realization and how this whole incident might have influenced Draco. I really enjoyed your choice of words, fluent writing and extensive thoughts of one Severus Snape. Adding Moaning Myrtle was also a huge plus for her role is so small in Rowling's books, understandably though. I hope you'll continue this fic soon for I really, really think this is one of the most promising fics I've read for a long time! :)
| Title: Chapter 2
| 19 Dec 2009 8:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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No you can't be too hard on Filch. Great chapter with Severus being IC but I'm not sure about Draco! Thank you for a great chapter
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