Hard on Filch? Nah! Brilliant chapter - I loved it!
Great chapter! I am enjoying this story a lot. It's a really interesting idea and there's a lot of potential here. Severua was very in-character, and I"m glad he noticed Harry's old scars.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 17 Dec 2009 8:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Fang's Fawn (Anonymous)
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Great story...compelling, well-written, and everyone in character. Great job!
Oh brilliant! Can't wait for your next update! That was fantastic!
Fantastic again! Keep it up!
Oh that was excellent. I like this version better than Canon. Hee hee. I hope that in THIS version that it's Malfoy that gets in trouble with Snape, not Harry.
Another fantastic installment, you are a phenomonal writer, I eagerly anticipate more. I loved the bit with Myrtle. lol.
Ooooo I like this even better than the first chapter!! And no, you weren't too hard on Filch. Filch is a creepy, creepy guy. I also love your interpretation of Myrtle. I could totally see her reacting just like that. :0)
When is Harry going to learn that body binds and disarming spells aren't always going to cut it when fighting dark wizards?
Yikes! I can't wait to find out what happens to Harry.
Author's Response: I guess it's difficult to break a habit, lol. Thanks for reviewing!
This sounds brilliant! I've been looking forward to someone forming a response to this challenge (I'm too cowadly to try and do it myself!) and that definitely lived up to my expectations! I loved it!
Author's Response: I've been waiting for someone to respond to it, too! But I couldn't take it any longer, so I wrote my own, lol. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review!
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