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Title: Chapter 1 01 Dec 2009 6:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great start to the story I love a dramatic opening! This looks very good so please update soon and keep writing thank you

    Author's Response: Dramatic is the only way to go, lol! I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 01 Dec 2009 12:42 am
Reviewer: severitusfan4ever (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ooohh... can't wait for another chapter! I really wanted to answer this challenge but never got around to :) great start!

    Author's Response: I've been keeping my eye on it for some time, myself, but when no one responded, I couldn't take it any longer! I'm glad you like it so far! Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Nov 2009 12:39 am
Reviewer: mwc (Signed) [Report This]
    you may not have meant to write it, but that's an excellent start. you even have the cliffie idea down pat. =) can't wait to read more.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. The cliffie part was no problem, it's figuring out what goes next! Lol. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 5:13 pm
Reviewer: Verdad y Vida (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Neat! I like it, even though I honestly don't think Harry had to opportunity to "think over" whether to cast Sectumsempra. It was an instantaneous reaction to the fact that Malfoy had just attacked him; it wasn't premeditated in the slightest. Personally, I'm in Ginny's camp on this one. :D
    But no matter. Back to the story! What did Draco cast on him, other than the crucio!?!? Scary! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

    Author's Response: I can't remember if I already mentioned this somewhere else, but I do agree with you. I actually wrote a whole lot addressing how OOC it was for Harry to have thought his actions through for a change, but I ended up deleting it all because it was a little overwhelming. I meant to leave a sentence, but I guess I forgot. The OOCness was for the sake of the story, though. Sorry if that was a little long-winded. It's a habit. Lol. Anywho, I do appreciate your review! :)
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 1:56 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant story can't wait for more

    Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review, SS!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 12:22 pm
Reviewer: Susana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very enjoyable first chapter, hope you keep writing!

    Author's Response: Thanks, Susana! I'm pleased to hear you enjoyed it. I just hope the second chapter is just as enjoyable! Thanks again for review!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 1:13 am
Reviewer: Clovergirl22 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah! A very interesting "what if" story in the making. You are a very talented writer from what I can tell so far, great chapter, terrific start! Can't wait for more, I'm going to have my eye on this one ;)

    Author's Response: I'm glad the story has piqued your interest. I hope I can keep you involved. Thanks for the review!
Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 12:44 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Great idea and beginning! I'll definitely be following this story. :D Are you going to keep Snape more or less hating Harry? And will he continue spying?

    Author's Response:

    Hm, I don't want to make any promises this early on. To be perfectly honest, when I wrote the first draft of this chapter, it was completely different. I will say, however, that with things as they are (Draco having cast an unforgivable on a fellow student, Snape having taken the unbreakable vow, and Dumbledore having been cursed by the ring), there is very limited space to make Snape as coddling as I may like without catastrophic results. Whew, I hope I answered your question as cryptically as possible.  :)

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 1 29 Nov 2009 12:03 am
Reviewer: dragonero (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool start!!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're interested, and thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 1 28 Nov 2009 11:15 pm
Reviewer: Rachel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting start. I like your style from the perspective of a semi-conscious person. It was very believeable.

    Author's Response: I drew inspiration from the fact that it was 3am and I was kind of semi-conscious while writing this chapter. I'm happy to have convinced at least one person that I knew what I was talking about. Hehe. Thanks for your review!

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