Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Someday At Christmas 16 Jan 2010 5:04 am
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    aw! that was so sad at the end!!!! you wrote the whole argument really well. it was believable. i loved it. cant wait for the next chapter!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 10:04 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    another great chapter, my dear. and congrats on being Featured with theis wonderful story.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and so glad you liked it!
Title: Someday At Christmas 15 Jan 2010 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Huntresss (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm a bit harsh... its mid terms after all he can still pass the year with good grades He just needed a reminder that there's more to life than games. His Head of House also should have pushed him harder to do his work and cut back on pratices when his grades started dropping. he was after all suppose to be second string not first.

    Not a good way at all for the news to come out... I hope that Harry and Severus doesn't go completely crazy and ruin whats been so good for all of them.
Title: Someday At Christmas 15 Jan 2010 3:35 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! that was rather explosive, I wasnt expecting him to be told like that but like you say Severus does have a temper lol, maybe Augustus needs to help smooth things over a bit, remind Harry of how much his father loves him before Severus talks to him :)
Title: Someday At Christmas 15 Jan 2010 2:19 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    For some reason, I imagined that was how Harry was going to be told. In a fit of temper. Wow what a chapter and what a cliffee. I really liked that Howler. My face turned red as well when I read that. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Title: Someday At Christmas 15 Jan 2010 1:20 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry behaved exactly like you would expect an eleven year old to act during his first time away from his parent. At first he did his best to behave, then he started to have fun and to slack off a bit. Severus is right about Professor Malfoy though, it was her responsibility to ensure that her students applied themselves and didn't get overwhelmed. When Harry's grades began to drop he should have been pulled from Quiddich. No game is more important than education.

    This is the reason why Severus should have told Harry the truth long ago. By telling Harry in anger, Severus has caused a breach in the trust between them. There really was no good reason to keep it from Harry so long that he was 'adopted'. Harry's hurt right now and it will take time for him to process his new knowledge, but when he does (and Severus explains everything to him) I'm sure that he will forgive his father and they will be able to begin building trust again.

    Great chapter!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 12:11 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot to say congrats on your award--this story so deserves it, it's the best Christmas story ever! And there's a new chapter--have to go read it! YIPPEE!

    Author's Response: Thanks, please do!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 11:51 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow what a chapter! The ice skating was awesome, I love how Snape's powers are turning out and I also liked the Christmas with the Longbottoms. The puppy peeing on Augusta's shoe was hilarious.

    And I'm glad Augustus understood and forgave Severus his deception. Somehow I doubt Harry will take it as well.

    Oh and congratulations on your award!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and I've just posted again!

    Read to find out if you're right about Harry!

Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 11:41 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww such a great chapter. Those kids are something else! I loved how Augustus took the news and can't wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Yes they are, but they're typical kids.  I'm glad you're enjoying this!
Title: White Christmas 15 Jan 2010 9:59 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the ice skating scene it was really funny! That Blaise is as bad as Harry!

    And the kids getting Nev a dog . . .why am I not surprised? Kids think nothing of that sort of thing and Sev reciting the alphabet was funny.

    Yay, I guessed right!

    I think Harry will be shocked and angry at first and then calm down and realize that Severus finding him was the best thing that ever happened to him.

    Congratulations, you deserve it!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks and you are so right. Kids act first and then think later. 

    Check out the next chapter to see if you're right.


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5