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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 4:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness the truth is out can't wait for Harry's reaction! Loved the skating episode and the puppy of course i hope we get to see him again. Thank you for updating

    Author's Response:

    You will see him again in the next chapter and also Smithers and Sandra.  Plus some new people.  I love the skating too. I wish I could skate like Severus, LOL!

    Here's the next chapter for you and be warned . . .it is longer than this one! Hope you enjoy it!

Title: Mr. Grinch 14 Jan 2010 2:22 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful present and a great chapter thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. Glad you're enjoying this!
Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 10:02 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw so glad that Augustus reacted that way, I suspected that he wouldnt have a problem with it but you never know with these fanfic authors ;) I really hope that Harry takes it well, I cant see why he would have a problem being an intelligent child that ought to have good self esteem and a sense of worth from living with Severus and Augustus for so long. Loved Nevilles gift too, that puppy sounds and awful lot like mine that has also given chewing metal (as well as everything else!) a good try lol :)

    Author's Response:

    LOL!

    he should take it well . . .unless something happens and he gets angry. 

    OMG, your dog chews metal?? Heaven help you! Mine only chewed furniture and that was bad enough. Your dog sounds like my friend's Lab who ate the leg off her kitchen table.

    Hope you like the next chapter I've posted!

Title: White Christmas 14 Jan 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: MP (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You are an amazing storyteller.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!
Title: White Christmas 13 Jan 2010 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    haha that was awesome, potions alphabet ^^
    it was a bit awww when you take it from augustus's side because you feel his hurt from severus not believing in him. but it's good that they both understand each other better and forgive.
    now next is harry...though i fear what is going to happen, i just have a bad feeling...i just hope i'm wrong.

    Author's Response:

    yeah that potions alphabet was a blast! Poor Sev, LOL!

    You're right, you do feel how hurt Augustus was but he knows that Sev meant well and he will alwats love them both.

    Read the next chapter and find out . . .you never know!

Title: White Christmas 13 Jan 2010 6:30 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Grandpa Prince! He's fun!

    Author's Response: Thanks and so do I. He's great fun to write too.
Title: White Christmas 13 Jan 2010 4:31 pm
Reviewer: Dramagirl007 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay I really liked this chapter. Oh wow I wonder how Harry is going to take the news. That's right, Harry isn't adopted by Severus yet. That will be funny when the news gets out about the Boy Who Lived being the son of Severus Snape. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)

    Author's Response:

    No, not yet. But maybe he will be soon. Yes it will be funny, but first Harry needs to know.

    Thanks for reviewing and check out the next chapter for Harry's school days and reaction.

Title: White Christmas 13 Jan 2010 1:39 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Augustus reacted pretty much like you would expect him to. I do wish that Severus had told him the truth sooner. Augustus loves him and Harry and he would never have cast them out.

    While Harry and Blaise probably shouldn't have gotten Neville a puppy without making sure it was okay first, I'm glad that they did. The familiar should fit the wizard; Neville needed one that could be a friend and guardian and a puppy is perfect for that role. I am glad that Harry was able to 'convince' Augusta to allow Neville to keep Trouble.

    I'm glad that the accident wasn't too bad. It's good that Severus is a Water Master, because it could have been quite terrible for Blaise otherwise.

    Author's Response:

    You're right, he does, and yet Severus delayed because of his insecurity complex. 

    Yes that's true--the dog is the pefect familiar for Nev. Harry is something else, isn't he?

    Yes how true that is! As his mom knew very well. The kid might have died, it's happened before in RL.

    Check out the next chapter for Harry's reaction and his school days. Thanks as always!

Title: White Christmas 13 Jan 2010 12:56 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, I'm glad that Augustus took that well, although, we all knew that he already suspected.

    I just hope thatHarry takes it as well.

    Congrats on your story receiving Featured Status.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Pandora!

    Hope you're feeling better and here's another chapter for you!

Title: Mr. Grinch 13 Jan 2010 8:42 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful chapter! Glad to see Harry remembers the goodness of giving and hopefully will make Smithers a little happier. Sometimes that's all it takes.

    I think Valeska is a brilliant familiar for Severus and they will get on great.

    As for Augustus, he might be a little angry that Severus didn't trust him, but then he'll get over it, because Harry really is his great-grandson in his heart.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and read the next part to see if you're right!

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