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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 10:58 pm
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Again a lovely chapter. I do feel for Smithers, and wonder if Harry has won a friend in him.

    I think Augustus will take it as well as can be expected, though I think he'll immediately understand the legal implications of the situation and try to get it cleared up.
Title: Where are you Christmas? 12 Jan 2010 10:44 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that was a very clever way to teach Harry a lesson.

    I feel so bad for Severus. I hope that Harry can forgive Severus when he finds out what he's done.
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 9:55 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh ooh me me! Im one that cant wait for the next chapter :D ive been wondering how Augustus will take the news, I like to think that he would be proud of Severus for keeping Harrys' best interests when so many would have used him as a hero :)
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 9:34 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice one! I suppose Augustus would be mad as hell, not at Severus, but the Durseleys! Not sure how Harry will take it though.. I hope you are not planning on having him know yet!
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 9:17 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I must say, I never expected to feel sorry for that Smithers but now I do. I'm glad Harry showed him some kindness and got him a present, he's a thoughtful boy.

    I loved Severus' new familiar and I hope Augustus is not too harsh with Severus for keeping that secret, he should understand.
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 4:11 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the Bird.
    Is Smithers really a Grinch or is he more of a Scrooge? ;)
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 1:42 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol Severus always the Slytherin XD singing for Sandra but then I'd think I'd give him and family discounts to hear him sing lol!
    Wow Harry is brave to give Mr. Smithers a gift, good to know he's growing up to be an awesome lad :D
    I loved Sev's familiar! Can't wait to see more of her!
    Next chapter...uh-oh and Neville always wanted for christmas? >_> uh his parents to have gotten cured? and sev tells augustus....i think his reaction would be thank you for telling me i already knew lol! but why didn't you tell me....*sev gives his answer* --silence-- XD
Title: Where are you Christmas? 12 Jan 2010 1:36 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow I'm really happy that Harry learned that everything isn't for him! :D I hope he learned his lesson!
    But wow the Harry isn't my real son thing is really making me feel...arg! I dunno what's gonna happen! >_< I hope he wont get mad or anything....well on to read the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    He has, don't worry.

    Yeah, i know it's very stressful isn't it?

    Augustus might get irritated he doesn't like to be lied to, but he is all in all a fair man.

Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 1:35 pm
Reviewer: shigeki11 (Signed) [Report This]
    hello!

    I've been enjoying your story so far. It's really good!
    to be honest, I totally forgot about Smithers. xD
    Sev's familiar's pretty awesome...where do you get these ideas?
    I think Augustus will take it pretty well. After all, he suspects it, right? Though I think he'll definitely want to kill the Dursleys'...and maybe Dumbledore too. hope I'm right! =)

    keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter!

    ~shige
Title: Mr. Grinch 12 Jan 2010 1:02 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Augustus will be momentarily shocked, although he is expecting something close to the truth, and then he will go after the muggles! I hate to see what happens when Augustus is enraged!

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