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Reviews For Away in a Manger
Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 26 Dec 2009 7:29 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. You captured the "wait in line" wonderfully--it is torture, especially if you are waiting to GET something, not just to pay (which is bad enough! ;-) )

    Wonderful Chapter! Thank you and Merry christmas.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes and I know how it feels. Utter torture1 Thank God I didn't have to go through that this year, but other years . . .

    Merry Christmas and I've updated again for you!

Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 26 Dec 2009 6:13 pm
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    another wonderful chapter!

    UH OH! Augustus is getting suspious. Look out Sev.

    And yes, i do remember the toy "crazes"!LOL I was one of the nuts on linr this year for those ZhuZhu pet hampsters!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, eventually Augustus might figure it all out before Sev makes up his mind to tell him.

    OMG, do I feel bad for you! Been there and done that!

    Hope you enjoy my next chapter I've posted!

Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 26 Dec 2009 7:44 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful1 I loved every minute! Merry Christmas!

    Author's Response: Thanks and same to you!
Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 26 Dec 2009 2:01 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    How cute! Poor Malfoy (not)

    Author's Response: I agree! Hope you like the next chapter I've posted.
Title: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 25 Dec 2009 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I really like Augustus. It's very believable actually that, despte his grudge towards Eileen's choice of husband, he would be willing to accept Severus and Harry. After all, he's not immortal and staying angry with the past is pretty useless. It may sound morbid, but most old people are like that. I would know - my grandfather is very keen on making amends with his past, and he's almost ninety.

    Nice chappie. I'm really glad for Severus and Harry. And Augustus too. :)

    Author's Response:

    No, it doesn't sound morbid at all. My dad's been doing a few things like that for years, trying to let go of old grudges, because an Italian man can hold a grudge for years . .. they invented the vendetta after all. 

    All of them deserve each other and should make a happy family.  Though on occasion Sev and Augustus will butt heads.

    Thanks again for R & R ing!

Title: Blue Christmas 25 Dec 2009 10:55 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. I'm not really keen on reading baby!fics, but I'm thoroughly enjoying this one. And it's quite amusing to watch Severus tackle all the baby problems. :)

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry will really be a handful, and it's awful to take care of a baby when they're sick that way. It really tests you.

    Glad you're enjoying this and this will also show Harry growing up, not just as a little baby.

Title: What Child Is This? 25 Dec 2009 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    It breaks my heart to even see a stray dog (makes me want to find their masters and wring their necks). I can easily understand Severus' reaction - such cruelty as the Dursley's really is unimaginable. I hope things get better. For both of them.

    Very nice start.

    Author's Response:

    I know, I donate to every one of my local animal shelters and child abuse centers around the holidays. It's really inexcusable what they Dursleys did and one day they'll regret it.

    Thanks for reading!

Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 9:47 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    This just goes to show that doing a good deed does pay. Of course, he also made an enemy and a new friend. The Weasleys are a wonderful group and will make good playmates for little Harry if Severus decides to look Molly up sometime. I hope that Lucius won't cause trouble for Severus later if the truth about Harry comes out. Augustus has begun to get close to realizing the truth and I hope that Severus will tell him soon. He will need Augustus' help if someone gets too close to Harry and figures out that he is or rather was Harry Potter.

    Author's Response: Yes, it does and you never know about Lucius, he's a slippery character. You're right, Severus will need Augustus to help if someone else finds out who he is. But right now Harry's safe because nobody's seen him outside of Foxfire Hall. That may change soon though. Anyway, here's a new chppie for you and thanks so much for all your reviews! I need to go and review your story.
Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, sweet Harry. I'm worried though, because Augustus is getting suspicious.

    OOh, that Lucius is such an arse, isn't he? I just know that he's going to cause trouble for Sev and Harry, and that scares me.

    An autograph pic of Severus, you say? Yummy! Thanks.

    Merry Christmas!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Augustus is too canny to not figure out what's going on.

    He is and he's going to cause a bit of a stir later on.

    I agree, he's so sexy!

    Merry Christmas to you too and hope it's a good one!

    I've posted again, BTW! Happy reading.

Title: I Want A Hippopotamus For Christmas 25 Dec 2009 8:34 pm
Reviewer: Keats (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it... love how you introduced Molly and Lucius. Happy that Lucius did not get his way.

    Happy Christmas

    Author's Response:

    Same to you, hon!

    And here's a new one for you!


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